Title:
The title of a hint fiction piece should itself be a hint at the story.
The title was alluring and suspensfull.
It pulled the reader in.
Good job.
Storyline:
Hint fiction pieces should be able to stand on their own as complete stories
The story has the elements necessary to make it complete.
The characters are identified and the conflict is defined.
It is independent.
Punctuation, grammar, spelling:
The usage of punctuation and grammar can help direct emotion and characteristics in hint fiction.
The story consists of two sentences,both separated with commas.
The use of dialogue helps develope the plot.
Ending the story with a question leaves it open to an answer.
The language was romantic and poetic.
Content:
Hint fiction should be intriguing and draw the reader in for more.
The story certainly hints at a lager work.
It leaves the reader wondering what had happened before.
Followed contest rules:
There are only a few rules to hint fiction, item is always 25 words or less.
This story was 25 words, although I don't know if
Cherry-Cola should be hyphenated.
I looked it up and couldn't find anything to say either way, so it passes.
The story follows the other contest rules to qualify.
Nice Job
Thank you for entering my contest and good work.
This review is meant as constructive criticism and should be taken as such. This is an individual opinion and not that of a collective effort.
The Wordgoddess