Wow that's a great plot twist. I love it when bullies get their backside's handed to them so thank you for that!
Do you have any more to flesh this out? Maybe some kind of next chapter where the Captain's beam out snags his attacker instead, so now they have captured a ship? I'd bet they're smart enough to keep Bril on as a slave to pilot for them at fangpoint... Anyway, just an idea for a way to extend your story and turn it around all the way.
This was a fantastic story! Great Sci in your Fi and also very sexy. The sexy woman-as-kitten fantasy is pretty common and you're right deeply in it.
I was hoping for this kind of story to fuel my inspiration with this kind of mild adult style... You're right where I want to be with the clear yet unspoken hints of sexiness to come, just perfect.
Is there a follow up? Further chapters of the story? You've got us right on the edge of our chairs hoping to voyeur in on the cold clear night time keeping warm activities... Do continue.
Eric I'm just amazed at this novella! How can you get that truly published my friend?
You have inspired me to connect the dots between my two planned series' of stories with some of the elements of Moon Duty. I adore your characters interactions and your species interactions. Your descriptions of starfighter pilot jargon and combat maneuvers is the very best I've ever read. I only hope to get mine up to this good!
Publish this series as a novel! Please!
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