Familiar subject for me. Your rhyme words every 2 lines, good.Reading a little jerky, smooth was not necessary to get thought processed. "This future date will soon fall, saving or daming us all."
Gives pause, to think about life, and the end of time. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
This would have to have a perfect rateing, because it is real, true from the heart. I could feel your emotions of the starting out on a begining of what was to be a joyful Sunday and celebrating your Father's birthday. The loss of a parent is never easy, but this was trama@drama! My heart goes out to you. Blessings...-
A Snowy Day &Smoking Alone, are two poems about same person?
Sounds as if life has been lived, and now, "Radiant and beautiful"
after working hard, etc. has the impression perhaps she has died?
Especially, after reading your second poem. "sleeping extra late, to make your dream last longer" You must have had a wonderful soul mate. Keep up your writing from the soul. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
Whew, author leaves many open thoughts."She begins treading on their lives"{Who is doing the treading, which is She?}
"Lost hand of Mother" {is this loss of memory, lost movement due to stroke?} Or~~~Lungs heavy on backside, caugh is rough, and smoking at 2AM, might there be cancer?} This Sounds like time for truth being written perhaps in a journal.
This can draw many different memories for readers. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
Have read several of your informative writings. You go into such detail, it sound so simple. However, I shall probably still have to copy, underline, anread often. All I've learned avout computers is from my grandchildren. Blessings...-
Thanks for inspiring reminders. Makes one want to "expose" all their talents right now. I enjoy our time together{like conversing, & counseling from a friend. Blessings...-
Perfect. Yes, yes, yes. You state your views very clearly. Our common sense has turned to just common.
I like your wording. Simple enough for children to read, and probably too profound for some adults. Blessings...-
So true. The best time is now. You stated it so clearly. We who have lived many years have memories, and understand what you are saying. Carefree is a wonderful state of mind. We enjoy tjis season, and
as you say, we pray for God's guidance. Your writing is like a conversation. It also is as Prov.27:1 says,Do not boast of tomorrow, for you do not know what a day may bring forth. Blessings...-
After reading & writing & reading, all my head & brain could take in this eve., your site was so interisting I read it completely. Now, don't ask me to take a test on what was read.{I'm old}
Was very detailed, inspiring, pretty illustrations. Blessings...-
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