Who this is really good and descriptive; it was very interesting.What you wrote is what I like to read and write about most of the time.Continue the good work.
Wow this part was extremely good, I really like the way you write this story so far it is so well thought out and amazing. I really love how you tell the story in this chapter and I also love how you ended it at the end with the King and Prince of the Mencun show up.
Wow this is really amazing and wonderful I love how the story line is going. You really must continue with this story, it already has me hooked on Jorcan and Ayala's story. I can not help but love this and all so keep up the good story writing I can not wait until you put up the next chapter.
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