I couldn't take my eyes off the page. Wow!
I thought the idea was a little dry, but the way you wrote it was intensly satisfying.
I didn't think the ending fitted. He only felt the pain the other times. He was never injured. When he died, it was a bit..., well you know what I mean.
Beutiful. I really appreciate the trubute to our country. It shows our nation, and Obama, in one of the best lights possible. The historiical sentances were memorable. You should publish this.
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