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Review by MsCaseyLuna Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Jellybean4401!

I have read your work "The storybook of life" and this is my review about it.

>It has a very good flow from one individual to how his/her storybook connects with the world.
>It's not in the paragraph form which I suggest you to do so.
>It seem to have a powerful point that "we are not alone" and I like that.
>All in all, I like the philosophy and point.

I can tell you I really like it a lot because it's so true and I also believe that the world is a big storybook.
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Review by MsCaseyLuna Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
So sad poem.. but I like it. I just my man before realize he loves me still. Anyways, you had a good job on this.
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Review of Someone Else  Open in new Window.
Review by MsCaseyLuna Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Sometimes when we worry about our own personality, wishing we could be someone else, just think of the things that the other people don't have, that you actually have. We're all uniquely made for a purpose. Anyways, I've been through that feeling and I'm just saying my thoughts :) Nice poem, I like how emotional the flow is.
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Review of Ask the Stars  Open in new Window.
Review by MsCaseyLuna Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
It touched me. What a nice poem :)
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Review of Tell Not A Soul.  Open in new Window.
Review by MsCaseyLuna Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Emotions just spins through it. It's like expressing your feelings while still keeping a lot from one living soul. :)
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