This is one of the most well written and erotic stories within the genre I have read. I'm a huge fan of unaware and the scenario in this tale is a rather underused one I feel. The descriptions are detailed and the characters thoughts seem natural. I bet you two had a blast coming up with ideas for this one.
I'll likely add a chapter at some point when I have a bit of free time but until then I look forward to seeing where this story goes.
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