Wow, this was rather fantastic. Normally, I am not a huge fan of long, complex words being used in either poetry or prose, and upon first reading your poem, I disregarded it as bad. But then i read it again, and waddya know, it just clicked.
The diction used simply works: "Honey cascading..." what a lovely image. In fact, all of the imagery is great.
One of the best poems I have read describing a woman.
Kudos.
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