Hullo. Not bad, not bad. It would be nice if someone moved the Tetra and Saria stories along, though. All and all, good job. Here's some gift points to encourage you to help finish a couple of these stories.
Good show so far, Nelson. I've only read the weight-gain bit, but that's enough to convinve me that you're a good WG writer. I particularly enjoyed the first chapter for Weight Gain/Mona, where Mona is considering her options to help her out of the store. Also, the fact that Mona eats when she's bored ties in nicely with the fact that she's constantly on the go. All in all, I look forward to seeing more from you.
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