I enjoyed this story it was interesting but it could be improved with some work though i do like it carry on writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I enjoyed this story and would consider buying it if it was once published although I think that a Literary agent would help you improve it and widen your target market, making it more appealing to readers but all in all good plot, good characters,correct grammar. GOOD
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