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Review by Able Cain Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Pretty ambiguous meaning here. I like the style and the structure of the poem and I really like the fact that the mystery of the poem is matched in the style of it. If only it was cleare to me the meaning of it I'm sure I would enjoy it more. The constant changing of perspective from mouse to owl to seed threw me off at first but upon re-reading I see it clearer now. Overall, good poem and good structure and style, congrats on a good read
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Review of Watching  Open in new Window.
Review by Able Cain Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
First off, let me say that I like the content of the poem. I think everyone in their lifetime should write a prose questioning their exostential existence. While the language in some areas is lacking, if a few more rhetorical devices were used it could be a really good poem in a collection of greats. Keep up the writing and you'll develop a truely unique and great style
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