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Rated: E | (5.0)
Simply expressed-- the sweetness comes through without any "syrup"

Lines such as the ones below stand out for me.
"in inks of rainbow hues,
reasons deep, soul depth or shallow,
reasons selfish, loving, sweet."

There are other great lines as well.
I like the way you used line breaks bring in a sense of tension at the ends of some lines, for example "when he had no clue what " leaves the reader to fill in many possibilities before going on to the next line ad reading actual end of the thought.

Great job!
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