Beautiful! The author has captured the essence of whatever it is i feel when i look at the attached picture of the Nebula. The piece contains a wonderful juxtaposition of emotion between thoughts of the universe on a grand scale, and thoughts of ourselves as individuals, and connects these two elements with grace.
The steady pace of this piece brings the gloomy and somewhat depressed subject matter to life. I felt genuinely engaged with the writing. The first verse is seductive in its simplicity. The use of metaphor helps build tension in the piece, and emphasizes the writers message.
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