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Review by myrollingthunder Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
WOW! THis is great! When I reached the end, I wanted more. In the beginning, it was a little slow and I was having trouble getting. I thought how much longer than when I hit the halfway point, I was pulled in. I felt like I was in "the shop" eavesdropping on them.

Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more.
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Review by myrollingthunder Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Wow, it was intense. I like that it is sexual yet not. Makes you think about all the things that are continuing after she leaves them; like you are standing next to her waiting for her to say something or should you say something. I like the intimacy, even for a quickie. Well done.
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