This was amazing. You do have quite a talent for writing, and this plainly shows it. If you could see it, you'd know I'm clapping. This shows really how much a pregnancy at a young age can effect someone. Really really good! I didn't find anything wrong, and it ended on a nice note. Great work! I can't wait to read more of your stuff! :)
I like the pace of this poem. Heck, I like the poem all together. I like how you used some very visuall words, with the abillity to make it make sense. Again, great poem. Keep up the amazing work!
I have never read something like this. Not a bad thing at all, shows how awesomely origonal you are! Great work, the wording is awesome, the way it was formated kept the pace going, I honestly think this is one heck of a poem. Really, keep up the awesome work!
I like this a lot! It's not pathetic, it screams the truth. I'd bet a lot of people feel like that, even some of the happiest people, including myself. Very good poem, keep up the awesome writing!
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