The poem is very emotional within the speaker. It is mixed with depression and joyful and it well done on how he did that. The speaker is getting more trapped and is becoming more of a psycho. I wish it showed a more descriptive progress what the person is going through and it would what himself and his emotions are going through.
The poem started off humorous and in a social form. I like the progression from a funny to a serious confident booster. It gains my attention from the beginning and leaves a wonderful theme at the end. The message it gives should be a universal thing that everyone should believe in. It feels like the author is trustworthy and is sad when others are in sorrow.
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