Rated three stars at this point, little to go on. Funny that the hook of a story is supposed to mean the most to a reader right when they pick up a book, but then it's the end that matters if they decide to go on. Still, suspense awaits. Will the evil threaten the Illiads? Will they turn brother to brother? We'll have to wait for further entries.
This short story really sends a message. The little things in life matter to adults the most, although children don't seem to care about them much these days. The narrator's daughter seems to be more interested in video games than the things of the past. I rated this a 4 because the story has meaning, yet the characters are given too little detail.
I kinda have an obsession about giants; don't know why. In this poem the narrator daydreams of becoming a giant and enforcing world peace, at last. He also imagines seeing the world at an extraordinarily fast pace, as a 200 foot tall man may make use of with his size. Good poem, descriptive, but maybe a little too short. First review by the way. Thanks for the 150 GPs!
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