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Review by Thomas Boone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really like this, I feel the sadness that she does. The section where you write the things she wrote to him is pretty sad not going to lie. (Which is a good thing) it also makes me want to know more about the situation. I want to know how he died I want the full story after reading this. Good job:)
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this a lot. The structure and wording help compel emotion. I especially like the words you used like "pierces" and how you say "holes in my body where the light cuts through me like a knife" very good work please keep up the good job you have a lot of talent :)
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