cool. I liked how you had it to where two people could read it, our something in that manner. I liked how it was short, on topic, and kinda something people would want to keep reading. I rate this 5 stars. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading it. ^.^ ~Skylar
Awe so sweet! Is your Grandpa really a Vietnam soldier. You don't have to answer but I was curious. Anyways back to the poem, I liked it... Never mind.... I LOVE IT!
Nice poem, I can relate with the girl in the poem by the way I am. You are amazing at writing a poem.....:) you should keep writing for you are good at it. Your poem deserves five stars. ~Skylar
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