I though this was wonderful, I'm not much of a critic, so I dont know if it can be improved or not , I Just know that I like it. sorry its not very in depth of me. But it was good.
I like your poems, but I dont write much poetry so I don't understand ones that arn't staight forward. I like the stupid dumbness poem. I read it and the funny stupid stuff my kids do popped into my head. Good writting. I like things that make me feel something when I read it and that one did.
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