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Rated: E | (5.0)
This philosophical poem deeply studies the interconnectedness of blessing, amending, and counting, suggesting these concepts are cyclical and mutually strengthening. The act of blessing always portraying as a transformative process that shapes the future, while amending signifies a necessary change that leads to blessings. The repetition of phrases stresses the importance of these actions in creating a meaningful existence.This philosophical poem also digs into the religious dimension, linking the idea of amendment to spiritual beliefs and the Bible. It suggests that the Bible serves as a guiding force for future amendments, strengthening the concept that religious bóoks, like Holy Bible, are not just the historical documents but also living sources of wisdom that influence future actions. The interplay between counting and blessing further explains the idea that reflection and acknowledgment are essential in the journey of spiritual and personal growth.

Overall, the poem invites the readers to contemplate the significance of their actions and beliefs in shaping their futures.
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for entry "April 3 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This blog post enlightens us about the several personal updates and achievements. The blogger congratulates the reviewers of the "disABILITY WRITERS GROUP" for March 2025, indicating a sense of community and recognition. She expresses a commitment to enhancing her portfolio, noting the last update came two years ago. That is a very long time. She also mentions the purchase of a journal for daily writing, which is part of her therapeutic process. The author is also working on a poem and considering entering contests, showcasing her creative engagement.



Additionally, the author creates a reflection on the weather, describing it as cold and sunny, which contrasts with her expectations for spring. She shares her decision to run after a bachelor's degree in arts and humanities through online courses at Madison Area Technical College, stressing a desire for personal growth and learning at the age of 66. Her aim is to learn more at the age of 66! It is exceptional. I must congratulate her for the hunger for learning. It'll make her mentally fit and fine, too.



This decision displays a proactive approach to expanding her horizons and continuing education later in life. That poem deals in-depth with the complicated relationship between leadership and the concept of heaven, presenting a symbolic journey and stressing the fact that a leader's pathway is not just a physical route but an underground journey that leads to a higher state of being or enlightenment, symbolized as heaven. The repetition of phrases expresses the interconnectedness of leadership and the divine, suggesting that the path to becoming a leader is also a path to achieve a heavenly state.



This philosophical poem tells us that both heaven and leadership have an interrelationship with each other to serve as guidance to each other. It predicts that the essence of leadership is finding it in the journey towards heaven, indicating that true leadership always remains involved with the tough challenges and finding one's way to a higher purpose. The use of the term underground hints to us that this journey may be invisible or almost invisible, yet it is essential for reaching the ultimate goal of heaven.



Overall, this poem echoes the philosophical idea that the chasing of leadership is a spiritual journey, where the ways to achieve the goals are as significant as the destination itself, and invites the readers to consider the serious fact behind leadership and the transformative powers of attempting a higher ideal.
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for entry "April 2 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The previous day was a rainy and humid day, which is beneficial for Wisconsin's low water tables.

The blogger expressed a longing for sunshine and the feeling of refreshment. The morning dew on the grass created the simple pleasure of walking barefoot through the tall grass with her cat. Despite experiencing a headache and sore throat, the overall sentiment of the day remained positive.

As the day progressed, the day was made on the author's portfolio, which was aided by the thoughtful gift of a journal for personal reflections. While she acknowledged that there was still much work to be done, the day was filled with social interactions, providing a sense of fulfilment.

The author looked forward to a quieter day today to focus on writing. The sense of community and pride in being a Wisconsinite is highlighted, particularly in response to local political events, strengthening a feeling of unity and empowerment.

The blogger also expressed her gratefulness for the opportunity to voice her thoughts and engage with her surroundings.
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This poem deals in-depth into the complicated relationship between leadership and the concept of heaven, presenting a symbolic journey. It stresses the fact that a leader's pathway is not just a physical route but an underground journey that leads to a higher state of being or enlightenment, symbolized as heaven. The repetition of phrases highlights the interconnectedness of leadership and the divine, suggesting that the path to becoming a leader is also a path to achieve a heavenly state.

This philosophical poem suggests that both heaven and leadership have an interrelation with each other to serve as guidance to each other. It predicts that the essence of leadership is finding it in the journey towards heaven, indicating that true leadership always remains involved with the tough challenges and finding one's way to a higher purpose. The use of the term underground hints to us that this journey may be nonvisible or less visible, yet it is essential for reaching the ultimate goal of heaven.

Overall, this poem echoes the philosophical idea that the pursuit of leadership is a spiritual journey, where the paths taken are as significant as the destination itself. It invites the readers to consider the serious fact behind leadership and the transformative power of striving for a higher ideal.
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for entry "April 1 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Yesterday the blogger opened her email on writing.com, and she found three, no, four times that she was nominated for the finalists for the made it into the finals! She felt proud of her word art, and being a member of WDC is an honour. She had tried other groups for writing but never got such which she got in this community. I also realized that fact. The authority knows pretty well how to honour an author.The writer went out yesterday and had a stylish haircut. Her hair was so long. That was a big back, and she couldn't stand Longer-term yesterday.She started out sunny; now the clouds have moved back in, and the temperatures are going to dip again, and we're expecting to sleep on snow, and it will be that way all day. Today the blogger is expecting the rain.
At the end, the author prayed to God for a better life for everybody.
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for entry "March 31 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is another beautifully written blog post.

The day began with much-needed rain, although there was hope for sunshine later, too. The temperature was in the mid-50s, creating a comfortable atmosphere without wind.

As the day progressed, work was made on the portfolio, which required significant work, particularly in preparing for the April birthdays for the WDC Angel Army.

The author continued to work on a sonnet that had been in progress for six months, reflecting on the swift passage of time as March came to an end. There were plans to update blogs and various groups all day.She also expressed her gratefulness towards Sonali, an important member of WDC, for a beautiful postcard and to Schnujo, another important pillar of WDC, for a lovely card received in the ongoing month.

A heart-touching writing prayer was also offered for everyone in the WDC community and around the world, with a special mention for a friend, Chris Breva, who was going through a challenging time and needed support.
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for entry "March 30 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The blogger told us the importance of a sense of positivity and the satisfaction through this blog and expressed her feelings of being good and eager to share thoughts early in the morning. Despite experiencing hunger, the blog writer planned to address that later, indicating a relaxed approach to the day. The rainy weather was embraced, leading to a cozy "payjama day" filled with old movies, which the author found enjoyable and comfortable. This season change was notable, with greener grass and singing birds contributing to a cheerful atmosphere, even enclosed by the cool temperatures.

The author also shared a personal update about purchasing a diamond art kit, which brought a renewed sense of vitality after feeling that remains inactive for weeks.

However, she also acknowledged the ongoing physical challenges, particularly with mobility. She expressed a desire for motivation to engage in more physical activities, such as walking in her apartment, too.

Additionally, the blogger addressed a technical issue regarding a link in a previous blog post that led to an incorrect page, promising to rectify it.

The post concluded with a message of goodwill, sending healing thoughts to the community during uncertain times.


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for entry "March 29 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The blogger of this blog post gave a description of waking up to a rainy day in Wisconsin. It was an urgent demand for the rain due to the area's dryness. She also mentioned taking a "pyjama day" to take rest, feeling tired after a brief outing the previous day. Despite the fatigue, the author expressed a commitment to continue working on her portfolio over the next few incoming days and indicated a return of creative inspiration, planning to write a poem.

She concluded with a message of goodwill, wishing peace for all of her friends and community.
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for entry "March 28 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The blogger told us that she spent a whole day at the bank, where she treated her sons to lunch. It was an unforgettable experience. She also found some enjoyable moments despite the lack of gratefulness from the children. She expressed that as a mixture of love and frustration. Their expressions were different; they could be on a separate planet. The weather was pleasant, with temperatures at 75 degrees. The skies were sunny. That was an added attraction to her.

Additionally, the writer remained busy with some artworks. She acknowledged a lack of motivation to write, assigning it to a temporary absence of inspiration. Instead. She decided to focus on her portfolio, viewing it as a productive alternative to passive activities like watching movies.

The author concluded with a message of goodwill, wishing blessings for everyone during challenging times.

Overall, it is a heart-touching blog post.


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for entry "March 27 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This blogger described a serene, rainy day that provided an opportunity for rest. She planned to work on her portfolio, acknowledging the ongoing challenges of creative work. Although she had completed her monthly poetry contest, but she didn't intend to write any new poetry that day.

The author expressed a sense of community and belonging with WDC, referring to it as her home.

A very touchy reflection on loss appears as the author shared her feelings about missing her late partner, Ed, as well as her parents. She memorized them about the joy and love. She also experienced Ed and expressed sadness over her parents and didn't present to witness her accomplishments, particularly the publication of her book. The writer concluded with a message of hope and encouragement to stay safe and engage in meaningful activities.
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Review of Pools of uranium!  Open in new Window.
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This poem presents a vivid and unsettling study of contamination and decay, using striking imagery and symbols to convey its themes. The character of Tim, known as Glowing Green, symbolizes the effects of pollution and disease, suggesting a connection between human health and environmental degradation. The poem's references to Geiger counters and new pestilence focus on the dangers of radiation and toxic substances, while the imagery of arms bent funny and pushing up daisies with bones like scimitars indicates a sense of physical deterioration and mortality. The construct "kings love rings" and "perimeter's no inhibitor" suggests that power and wealth don't shield individuals from the impacts of environmental crises.As the poem progresses, it searches into themes of societal decay and the psychological effects of contamination.

The imagery underlines the dryness of seeking safety in an impure world, while the mention of uranium and its effects serves as a sharp reminder of the dangers lurking beneath the surface.

The poem concludes with a sense of inevitability and encapsulates the duality of progress and destruction

Overall, the work serves as a powerful commentary on the intersection of human existence, environmental neglect, and the haunting consequences of our actions.
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Review of a champions fool  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This particular poem studies thoroughly the complicated relationship between fools and champions, suggesting that both control the qualities that have interconnection with their identities. It stresses that the weight or essence of a fool can mirror that of a champion, indicating a shared depth of experience or emotion. That poem also highlights the duality of roles, where the poet can see a champion as a fool and vice versa, suggesting that wisdom and foolishness are not mutually exclusive.The concept of a player emerges, illustrating how individuals can get direction to these roles, with players embodying both champions and fools.
This interplay suggests that the act of fooling is a common experience among champions, revealing vulnerabilities that connect them to fools.

Ultimately, that poem can observe the complexity of human nature, where the heart of a champion can also echo with the heart of a fool, blurring the lines between success and failure.
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for entry "March 26 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The previous day was comfortable due to the cool and damp weather, slightly warmer than previous days. There was an expectation of rain in the afternoon and the following day, today. The blogger thought about the cozy atmosphere that rainy days created, ideal for relaxing with a standard book and a blanket. She expressed an ongoing consideration about getting a cat, reducing concerns about potential damage to her wood floors and the challenges of managing litter and cleanliness.

The author also planned to focus on updating her portfolio and possibly writing a poem, despite feeling a strong inclination to sleep.

She concluded with a warm message wishing blessings to everyone in her community and beyond.
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for entry "March 25 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The blogger expressed uncertainty about her current situation, particularly concerning the writing and blog management. She noted that her health struggles had impacted her ability to write effectively. It is obvious.Recently, she dedicated time to cleaning up her blog, acknowledging that it is an ongoing task that requires more effort. She also mentioned receiving a premium blogging tool as a gift but has yet to fully utilize that.

On the brighter note, the writer told us, the weather was pleasant. She also shared a rare sighting of ten robins and was captivated by a stunning display of the aurora borealis, which they had never witnessed before.

Additionally, the author participated in a significant Senate race vote, despite experiencing pain and dealing with a lost absentee ballot.

She concluded her message with a positive note, wishing everyone well and encouraging safety during the uncertain times.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This poem, "Remains of a Juvenile Delinquent", shows us the internal struggles and the personal life of a misunderstood young girl, symbolizing through her carvings in an old school desk. It captures the essence of her revolt against authority and the emotional turmoil she experienced while feeling ignored by her teachers.

The imagery of her carving her name serves as a painfully affected reminder of her desire for recognition and existence in a world that overlooked her.This poem stresses the fact of the girl's longing for the connection and understanding, suggesting that despite her pain, she harboured love and hope for those around her. The plea for someone to acknowledge her efforts and the intimation of the signal of teaching her would be son, focused on her nurturing instincts and the depth of her character.

Ultimately, the poem carries the themes of isolation, the quest for identity, and the need for compassion, urging the readers to reflect on the importance of empathy and recognition in the lives of those who feel isolated.It's another fabulous poem by the poet.Continue your brilliance.
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Review of a crown truth  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
In this poem, the poet studies minutely the concept of truth as a personal experience, stressing the fact that the feeling plays a crucial role in defining what is considered true. It also suggests that the truth is not an absolute entity but rather a jewel of a crown that stays within the observer's outlook. The repeated phrases disclose the interconnectedness of the eyes, the beholder, and truth, indicating that understanding and explanations are seriously in-depth and secret.


This philosophical poem also implies that the essence of truth is found within the spectator's eye, suggesting that the viewpoint of each person can shape their understanding in reality. The symbol of the crown jewel signifies the value and intention of personal truth, elevating precious status.


Ultimately, the work is the reflection on the philosophical idea that construction makes through perception and that the act of seeing is inherently tied to the nature of truth itself.
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for entry "March 24 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Through this blog post, the blogger painted a nice image on a cloudy yet warming day in Wisconsin, showing the region's unique seasonal difference of construction and winter. The blogger expressed a longing for spring while sharing her personal updates on her writing journeys at present. She worked hard on improving her portfolio, making it more presentable and user-friendly, although she acknowledged that she still needed further improvement. All quality writers felt hungry for their improvement and always tried to create something better and new, having entered several writing contests and aimed to complete a poem to meet their weekly goals. After she finished a sonnet, she was looking at the balance between tenacity and the desire to avoid creative limitations.

Additionally, the blogger described a fruitful day spent cleaning the furniture that had collected construction dust, appreciating the newfound shine of it, and the completion of building renovations. She expressed gratefulness for the peace and loneliness that followed the construction work, concluding with a warm message of well-wishes for the community.


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Review of Snow Dragon  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This poem, "Snow Dragon", makes thorough studies about the themes of longing and separation through vivid imagery and the contrasting elements. The narrator begins by describing the coldness of winter, which sets a tone of isolation. This act of pouring hot coffee signifies a search for a bit of warmth and getting some comfort in the chilled condition.The pattern of interaction is focusing on the fact that the teller's reflection, which represents nurturing children on the ice, suggests a sense of care and responsibility. The imagery shifts as the narrator engages with the earth, symbolizing a deeper connection to life and nature, contrasting with the delicate presence of the white dragon, flying in the snow-filled sky. This contrasting stresses the tension between the speaker's grounded reality and the unattainable, almost mythical quality of the subject.

Overall, the poem beautifully captures a painfully affecting sense of longing and the complexities of emotional distance.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
That particular poem deeply studies the interplay between emotional states and physical symbols, particularly focusing on the concepts of cold-hearted and cold-blooded, and presents the heart as a central symbol, linking it to experiences that are both deep-rooted and detached. The repetition of phrases stresses the duality of the heart as both a source of life and a site of emotional coldness. The terms related to blood suggest a tension between vitality and emotional lack of sensation, indicating that experiences can be both intense and devoid of warmth.


Overall, the poem enlightens us on the fact of the complexity of human emotions, suggesting that even expressions of love or passion can be correlated with coldness and detachment.
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for entry "March 23 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The author expressed a sense of anticipation for the arrival of spring, highlighting the calming sounds of nature around her. She mentioned her commitment to working on her writing portfolio and creating a new poem, despite facing physical pain that has hampered her writing to some extent. The writer stressed the fact of her dedication to her online writing community, referring to WDC as a second home, and mentioned her intention to award a merit badge for the WDC Angel Army, the oldest activities group.

Additionally, the author viewed reviving a previously planned contest but decided to postpone it until after May, pending a medical evaluation regarding their knee. She expressed a desire to avoid further surgeries, as they are prolonged and painful procedures. She was willing to go to a book signing at a local library, and participation in a summer art walk was also mentioned, alongside ongoing challenges with her book titled "Sheldon Learns a Lesson"

The author concluded with a message of hope and safety during uncertain times.
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Review of Scars  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This poem deals with the theme of scars as a symbol for personal dark experiences and emotional pain.

It begins through acknowledging that everyone has scars, both visible and hidden, which represent the stories of their lives. The narrator reflects on how lies, heartbreak, and emotional turmoil contribute to the creation of these scars, stressing the deep connection between pain and identity.As the poem progresses, it searches into the darker aspects of suffering, representing the saddest nights filled with crazy thoughts and the temptation of self-harm. That imagery enlightens the fact of the struggle with inner demons and the desire to confront and release pain and symbolizes a purifying release, while the subsequent plea to "stitch me shut" signifies a longing for healing and closure.

Ultimately, the poem concludes with a self-contradictory acceptance of scars, suggesting that they are essential to one's story. The teller acknowledges that while they never desired these marks, they recognize the significance in shaping who they are. Scars, in this context, become a necessary part of the human experience, serving as reminders of survival and flexibility.

It is an extraordinary effort.

Write on!
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Review of a pro con artist  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem studied in-depth the complicated relationship between artistry and duplicity, stressing the duality of both advantage and disadvantage. It presented the idea that a con artist possesses some skills related to those of a true artist, blurring the lines between creativity and manipulation. The repetition of phrases highlighted the cyclical nature of these identities, suggesting that being a con artist is an art form in itself.This philosophical poem also searched minutely into the concept of hands down. It is indicating a definitive mastery or acceptance of one's role, whether as an artist or a con artist. The phrase suggested a state both defeated and established in the world of duplicity. That concept established the duality that every artist has had the elements of disadvantages of artistry within them, implying that creativity could sometimes involve either dishonesty or discouragement.


Overall, this poem expressed the reflection on the complexities of identity, skill, and the fine line between authenticity and duplicity, inviting the readers to reconsider the perceptions of both artists and con artists.
It is an excellent poetic work.
Continue with your majestic creativity.
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for entry "March 22 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The blogger shared her sense of relief at her computer functioning properly again, humorously attributing past issues to a "poltergeist". She expressed hope that the computer would continue to operate smoothly, allowing them to focus on their writing. The weather remained colder but sunny, prompting the writer to declare it as a "pyjama day" for composure and movie-watching while also working on various writing projects, including a portfolio, a book, and a poem.

Additionally, the author offered a heartfelt prayer for strength and peace, both for themselves and for their online writing community, highlighting their struggles with mental and physical health.
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Review of Instead  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The poem "Instead" makes an in-depth study about the themes of love, loss, and acceptance. The narrator expresses a wish for the partner not to miss them, stressing the self-feelings of longing and expressing the memories of affection, hope, and the complexities of the relationship, acknowledging the temporary nature of love. The teller carries a sense of resignation, recognizing that some connections are not meant to be tolerated, likening the relationship to a short-lived flame.

Throughout this particular poem, the speaker benefits from a clear stance against regret, choosing to move forward without looking back or longing for what was lost and rejecting the concept of second chances and instead focusing on the present and future. The closing lines suggest a wish for his former partner to find new love, while the speaker will continue to hold onto his memories.

Overall, this poem captures the bittersweet essence of parting ways with grace and understanding.
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Review of a crime of beauty  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
In this poem, the poet makes a serious study about the complicated relationship between beauty, justice, and morality. That suggests to us that these concepts have an in-depth interconnection. It advances to the fact that beauty is not purely entertaining but is also tied to moral and ethical dimensions, indicating that true beauty contains justice. The repetition of phrases stresses the idea that justice is recognized through the lens of beauty, and vice versa, creating a cyclical understanding of these themes.

This philosophical poem also addresses the concept of crime, declaring that a crime against beauty is simultaneously a crime against morality and justice. That enlightens us on the moral implications of actions deemed beautiful or unjust, suggesting that the perception of beauty can influence one's understanding of justice. The use of the word "magnificent", especially in this context, strengthens the idea that both beauty and justice can possess gloriousness and significance, further collaborating these concepts.

Ultimately, this philosophical poem concludes that moral justice is an essential aspect of beauty, and also for the eyes, symbolizing the perception that serves as a crucial catalyst role in understanding the relationship between these elements. The repeated references to the eye suggest a deeper philosophical inquiry into how we recognize and explain the beauty and justice in the world around us.It is an excellent poem. I hope we'll see your brilliant creation in the future, too.
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