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Review of lethal woman

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This particular poem presented a complex interplay of themes surrounding paradise, hell, and the nature of women, all encapsulated within the symbol of a wheel. It also explored the duality of existence, suggesting that paradise and hell are not purely oppositional states but rather intertwined experiences. The repeated references to "lethal eyes" indicated a perception of danger and attraction, implying that beauty and temptation could lead to destruction.The imagery of the wheel served as a central motif, symbolizing the cyclical nature of time and existence. It suggested that life is a continuous loop where moments of paradise and hell coexist. The phrase "a woman is a wheel of hell" highlighted the idea that femininity could embody both nurturing and destructive qualities, that is, reflecting societal views on women as both life-givers and sources of chaos.The poem also searched into the concept of time and was portraying it as a continuing force that could be both a blessing and a curse. The comparison between "a hell of a time" and "a hell of a paradise" illustrated the complexity of human experience, where joy and suffering are often inextricably linked. The idea that "set is setting the wheel of time" suggested that our perceptions and actions shape our reality, reinforcing the idea that individuals have agency in directing their experiences.

Overall, the poem conveyed a philosophical exploration of existence, stressing the interconnectedness of beauty, danger, time, and the feminine experience, and invited the readers to reflect on the dualities present in their own lives and the ways in which they recognize and interact with the world around them.
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Review of The Business of Perdition

for entry "Chapter 3: The Demimonde"

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This is another absorbing chapter of the novel.

That evening, the protagonist spent time in his office for the preparation of an important event, following detailed instructions from Barbara, the mysterious and elderly woman. As she directed him on how to arrange various items, her stern demeanour softened, and she felt a childlike excitement in their shared labour. Barbara's movements were graceful and methodical, giving an impression of someone deeply connected to the task at hand.

However, as he worked, he was struck by a sense of uneasiness, particularly when she warned him about the mirror in the room, suggesting it could attract unwanted observers. He carried the mirror downstairs, feeling an otherworldly sensation with each step, as if entering a different sphere. Once outside, he found himself in a surreal landscape filled with pale grass and a crimson sky, where he felt inexplicably drawn to a desperate cry for help. Following the sound, he discovered a wounded woman named Lilith, who recognized him and pleaded for assistance against a lurking threat known as the Ygg. As danger approached, Lilith and the protagonist prepared to confront the monstrous being, leading to a fierce battle for survival.It is a very exciting end of the chapter.

What will happen next?

We can't predict anything, just waiting eagerly for the fourth chapter, which will probably publish soon.
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Review of a skilled leader,a skilled science

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This particular poem explored the complicated relationship between leadership, science, and experience, stressing how these elements intertwined to shape effective leadership. It presented that the idea of their scientific understanding and practical experience was rooted deeply in their leadership skills. in The repetition of phrases underlined the idea that leadership was not purely about authorized but also about the mastery of skills and the application of knowledge.This philosophical poem articulated that experience served as a foundational element for both leaders and scientists, suggesting that the journey of leadership was related to a scientific path. That similar connection highlighted the importance of experiential learning in developing leadership qualities. This poem also suggested that timing played an important role in both science and leadership, indicating that a skilled leader must possess not only knowledge and experience but also the ability to act at the right moment.Furthermore, the poem conveyed that the essence of leadership lay in the ability to integrate skills, experience, and timing. It is advanced that a skilled leader is one who could lead in the direction of the complexities of their field with a scientific approach, thereby enhancing their effectiveness.Overall, this poem provided a philosophical reflection on the nature of leadership, suggesting that true leadership is a blend of science, experience, and the art of timing.
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#4801559

Review of The Business of Perdition

for entry "Chapter 2: One for Sorrow, Two for Joy"

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On a cold morning, the narrator encountered a crow in a churchyard, which greeted him thrice, symbolizing a rebirth and ironic connection to his past. The crow's calm demeanour interested him, and as he approached, it took flight, leaving behind a single feather that he collected.

He recalled an old nursery rhyme about crows as he pushed the feather into his hat, feeling inspired by its beauty. Seeking shelter from the storm, he approached an old gipsy woman, who was shivering in the rain, offering her warmth and companionship. Despite her initial doubtfulness, she engaged with him after recognizing the feather, hinting at her knowledge of its significance. As they walked together toward his office, a sense of camaraderie developed between them, contrasting their societal positions. Once inside, the gipsy woman, named Barbara, disclosed her abilities and suggested that they might uncover the crow's deeper meaning together. Their partnership begins as they negotiate terms for her services, marking the start of a new journey for both.

What a finish to this chapter!
It increases our thirst to know the next happenings.
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#4801406

Review of a zone of confidence

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This particular poem explored the concept of "basic" as a multi-aspect idea, intertwining it with themes of confidence, maturity, and questioning.

It presented "basic" not simply as a simple term but as a foundational element that underpins confidence and maturity. The repetition of the word "basic" stressed its significance, suggesting that it served as a core principle in understanding oneself and one's capabilities.This philosophical poem also struggled with the relationship between questions and maturity. It put forward that questions were not just enquiries but were deeply connected to one's growth and understanding. The concept that a question could embody maturity highlighted the complexity of human thought and the importance of self-reflection. The interplay between questions and answers was another focal point, suggesting that answers emerge from the questions posed, reinforcing the idea that inquiry is essential for personal Moreover, this poem suggested that confidence was a product of maturity, and maturity itself is a form of confidence. This cyclical relationship explained how these concepts were interdependent, each influencing the other. The repeated phrase "off the question lies" served to connect various elements, indicating that the essence of confidence, maturity, and understanding could be traced back to the questions we ask.

Overall, the poem presented a philosophical exploration of basic concepts, urging the readers to consider the deeper implications of their enquiries and the foundational role that confidence and maturity played in their lives. It invited reflection on how these elements interact and shape one's understanding of self and the world.
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#4801396

Review of Email Song

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The song "I Want To Send My Dad an Email" conveyed a painfully affected message heartfelt message about longing and connection. It explored the desire to communicate with a loved one, the narrator's dad, who has passed away, using the modern concept of email as a symbol for reaching out to the departed soul. The teller expressed a deep thrust trust to share updates about life, family, and cherished memories, highlighting the emotional weight of loss.

The lyricist painted that hungering beautifully.Throughout the lyrics, the narrator showed reflection on their current life, mentioning the well-being of family members and significant milestones, such as the birth of a grandchild. This contrast of everyday life with the absence of the father created a bittersweet tone, stressing the void left by his departure. The repeated questioning of why "heaven" isn't accessible through technology underscored the frustration of not being able to connect with the deceased in a tangible way.The song also made us a bit nostalgic, remembering fond memories of childhood and the bond shared with the father. That touches our hearts, we feel sad a bit.

The imagery of reaching for the sky while being lifted on his shoulders painted a vivid picture of innocence and love. The narrator's wish for a sign from their father, represented by a twinkling star, added a layer of hope and longing, suggesting that while the physical connection may be lost, the emotional ties remain strong.In its conclusion, the song encapsulated the everlasting love. The teller also felt for their father, expressing a desire to communicate that love, even if it remained unfulfilled. The overall tone was a mix of sorrow and affection, making it a touching tribute to the complexities of grief and the longing nature of familial bonds.

It is truly a beautiful creation.
Continue with your amezing creativity.
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#4801385

Review of The Business of Perdition

for entry "Chapter 1: Genesis"

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The narrator reflected on a time when he was known as Jeremiah, a time filled with joy and freedom in the streets of London, which had since transformed into a nightmare of desolation and violence. He described the hellish reality of the city's outcasts, where the destitute languish in misery, often disregarded by society. One fateful day, he witnessed a horrifying scene when a crazed man feasted on a dead gentleman in front of a crowd, leaving him traumatized. That frightful event became a catalyst for his setback and quest for meaning, as he struggled with his faith and the emptiness of religious rituals. During a church service at St. Paul’s, he rejected the Eucharist, feeling that it symbolized a hollow connection to God. Confronting the priest, he expressed his disdain for the superficiality of faith and the judgemental nature of the gathering.Ultimately, he embraced his transformation into something monstrous, shedding his former identity and seeking a new beginning. If we observe minutely, we will discover that this narrative captures the struggle between faith, hopelessness, and the search for purpose amidst the dark realities of life.It's an exciting chapter.We hope that remaining chapters will follow the same.
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Review of The Hellhound War (Ch1-3)

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In thes chapters, the narrative disclosed around John Wayden, a sergeant in the Ce’l Empire, who found himself in a terrible situation after wrongfully accused of murder. Chapter one began with John enduring the durable physical and emotional torment of his captivity, shackled and dragged by his former superior, Randy. The tension escalated as John struggled with his execution. The betrayal came from those once trusted.As the story progressed, a surprising twist occurred when Randy, instead of executing John, freed him from his shackles. That act of defiance was shrouded in mystery, as Randy disclosed that he had been instructed to help John by a powerful figure, General Briar Ta'lee. This chapter introduced a sense of urgency and danger. As John learnt, he was now an escapee and navigated a dangerous path. The appearance of an old magician added a layer of plot, as he magically healed John’s injuries and marked him for a mission that required him to adopt a new identity.The chapter concluded with John standing at the edge of the Dark Wood Forest, getting ready with a map and a water bag, considering his next move.The narrative effectively set the stage for John's journey, highlighting themes of betrayal, survival, and the quest for redemption. The readers anticipated another with another tensed part of anticipation for the trials John will face in the forest and the mysterious teacher he was meant to find.
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Review of showcasing a winner

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This particular poem presented a complex exploration of the concepts of winning, losing, and the nature of time. It struggled with the contradiction of what was meant to be a "winner" or a "loser," suggesting that the labels often assigned to individuals could be misleading. The repetition of phrases like "a winless winner" and "a loser is a winless winner" highlighted the idea that success and failure were not always clear-cut. That doubtfulness created a sense of confusion, prompting the readers to reconsider their understanding of achievements.This philosophical poem also examined the concept of showcasing, suggesting that the act of presenting a winner or a win could be the cause of betrayal. The phrase "showcasing is showcasing a winless win" implied that appearances could be misleading, and what was celebrated as a victory might not hold true substance. That theme of illusion continued with the exploration of ties, which were described as a "conquer of a tie," indicating that even in situations where outcomes seemed equal, there was a struggle for dominance.Time emerged as a significant theme, with the poem asserting that "time is to conquer." That phrase suggested that time itself was a battleground where both winners and losers were played out. The repetition of "winless" in relation to time reinforced the idea that time could be recognized as a series of missed opportunities or unfulfilled potential.The poem became complicated with the concept that time was both a showcasing and a showcasting tied, stressing the cyclical nature of these concepts.Overall, the poem's intricate wordplay and layered meanings invited the readers to reflect on the complexities of success, failure, and the passage of time. It challenged conventional definitions and encouraged a deeper understanding of how these elements interacted in life.
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#4800955

Review of god is a creator

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This particular poem explored the intense themes surrounding the concepts of divinity, creation, and the nature of existence.It also presented a cyclical relationship between God, the universe, and the act of ruling, suggesting that each element is interconnected and dependent on the others. The repeated phrase "stand by" served as a symbol for support and presence, indicating that God's creation and the universe itself are manifestations of divine oversight and authority.

The poem stressed that God is not only a creator but also a ruler, establishing a ranking where the divine governs the universe and its creations. A fundamental aspect of existence presents us with this ruling, suggesting that everything within the universe operates under a divine order. This concept of "criss-cross" introduced complexity, indicating that the relationships between ruling, creation, and divinity are complex in nature and intertwined, reflecting the multifaceted nature of reality.Time emerged as a significant theme, portrayed as a ruler in its own right.

This philosophical poem suggested that time governs not only itself but also the universe and the divine, implying that time is an essential dimension that influences all aspects of existence. This perspective invited the readers to contemplate the role of time in shaping reality and the divine order.

Overall, the poem conveyed a philosophical exploration of existence, stressing the interconnectedness of God, creation, and the universe, while also highlighting the importance of time as a governing force. The use of repetition and the idea of enrichment in the poem encouraged deeper reflection on the nature of reality and the divine.
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#4800952

Review of The New Woman

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The story begins dramatically. It is fantastic. We hope for a better story. The story will certainly revolve around her. She is the main character. This is the thinking of a story reader.The number of characters will be minimum; this is the first and foremost condition of an ideal short story, which follows perfectly.The straight enters into the story. That is the best of beginnings for a short story.It is truly impressive. In the very next chapter, we see the concluding part. If we jaanch separately, this is also meaningful.But, surprisingly, there is no story that can be a bridge between the beginning and the end part. It's a huge technical mistake.So there is no story. So there is no score to judge the readability. I think that you forgot to insert the main story.
Suggestion:
Be more careful from now on with the time writing.
Check at least twice to confirm you don't commit any further mistakes.
You have the talent to perform better. Try to capitalize that.

Wish you a prosperous future.
Keep writing.

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Review of A View In the Mirror

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The central character of this short story is SchererJoe. So, this story revolved around him , a young man who was working at the Ford Pavilion during the 1934 World's Fair in Chicago. He met Violet Dittman, and after a playful exchange, they quickly developed a romantic connection.

As time passed, they married and built a life together, raising their children and supporting each other through various challenges, including Joe's wartime duties. Despite hardships, their love remained strong, marked by Joe's consistent affection and little gestures like bringing yellow roses home for Vi. Years later, after Joe's passing, Vi struggled with loneliness and grief, especially on what would have been their fiftieth wedding anniversary. One day, she saw a vision of herself in a mirror, realizing the beauty Joe always saw in her. In a moment of transcendence, she was greeted by Joe's spirit, suggesting their enduring love will reunite them.

The narrative concluded on a hopeful note, hinting at the possibility of an afterlife together.

It is an excellent short story.
Continue your majestic majestic journey of literature.
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Review of a perfect science

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This poem presented a philosophical exploration of the relationship between science and knowledge, stressing their interconnectedness and the idea of perfection within this world. It articulated that science was not only a discipline but also a form of knowledge that achieved a state of perfection. The repetition of phrases underlined the concept that knowledge and science are inextricably linked, suggesting that one cannot exist without the other.This philosophical poem also highlighted the idea that well-known science represents the highest level of understanding, indicating that familiarity with scientific principles leads to a deeper comprehension of knowledge itself. The assertion connection further reinforced that the best forms of knowledge and science are those that are well kept, implying that preservation and careful consideration of scientific knowledge are essential for its continued relevance and application.Moreover, this poem posited that Earth itself is a manifestation of this perfect science, suggesting that the natural world embodies the principles of scientific inquiry and knowledge. The repeated emphasis on "best kept" indicated a reverence for the integrity of both science and knowledge, portraying them as treasures that must be safeguarded.Overall, the poem conveyed that science and knowledge are perfect and well-known entities that coexist harmoniously, with Earth serving as a testament to their significance. The exploration of these themes invited readers to reflect on the importance of maintaining and valuing scientific knowledge as a fundamental aspect of understanding the world.
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Review of Silent innocence Ch 5

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Rated: 13+

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In this fifth chapter of "Silent Innocence", Lee, engaged in a conversation with Sheriff Jaime, discloses his troubling dream about a possible murder of a little girl. The sheriff was sympathetic. And expressed the limitations of his authority and the need for concrete evidence before any action could be taken. Lee's intuition about Doyle raised the sheriff's concern, but it could only be for keeping the promise and an eye on the situation.The narrative haunted through Sheriff Jaime's backstory, detailing his past as a detective and the personal struggles he faced, including a failed marriage and a traumatic incident that led to his resignation. That history established a bond between Lee and the sheriff, as Lee felt reassured by Jaime's presence and experience.

After their conversation, Lee shared the sheriff's plan with his friend Sam, who was also supportive but realistic about the situation. Lee reflected on his own abilities, considering the possibility of using his psychic gift for profit, comparable with his great-grandmother's practices. He decided to reach out to his mother to enquire about any belongings of his grandmother that might provide insight into his abilities.As Lee rode his bike to his mother's house, he observed the small-town environment and encountered Derrick Collins, a classmate who was socially isolated due to his family's status. This brief interaction highlighted themes of empathy and social dynamics within the community.Upon arriving at his mother's home, Lee was enveloped by familiar scents and memories. He directed to the attic, where he discovered his grandmother's possessions, including items typically associated with fortune-telling.

Among these, he found a journal that piqued his interest, particularly a line that suggested the need to refine his foresight abilities. This discovery served as a crucial moment, hinting at the potential for Lee to explore and develop his psychic gift further.

Overall, this chapter intertwined themes of intuition, community, and the exploration of inherited abilities, setting the stage for Lee's journey in understanding and utilizing his gift.What a compact story it is!Continue your wonderful creativity.
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Review of Silent Innocence-Ch 4

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In this fourth chapter of "Silent Innocence", Lee also struggled with a troubling disclosure about a young girl named Julia, who is the granddaughter of a customer he encountered earlier. The emotional weight of the situation became apparent as he realized that Julia might be in danger, leading him to a state of anxiety and helplessness. Despite his instinct to inform the police, he feared to dismiss due to an unsound mind or becoming a suspect himself, which complicated his decision-making process.As Lee returned home, he found his partner Sam engrossed in soap operas, which starkly contrasted with his inner turmoil. Their lunch conversation disclosed his dream about Julia, and although Sam initially dismissed that as just a dream, she quickly recognized the gravity of the situation when he identifies Julia as Janet Feldman’s daughter. That acknowledgement heightened the urgency of the protagonist's feelings, prompting him to take action.

The protagonist's investigation led him to search for sex offenders in their town, where he discovered a name that stood out to him: Gilbert Doyle. His intuition told him that Doyle was suspicious, and he also felt a strong sense of foreboding about him. This instinct, combined with his psychic abilities, drove him to consider contacting the sheriff, Jaime Mendez, who had a personal connection with his family.The chapter concluded with the preparation to reach out to the sheriff, indicating a shift from passive concern to active involvement in trying to protect Julia.

Overall, this particular chapter effectively built tension and highlighted the protagonist's internal conflict as he balances his fears with a sense of responsibility. The introduction of Gilbert Doyle added a layer of suspense, setting the stage for potential confrontation and action in the following chapters. The emotional stakes were high, and the protagonist's determination to intervene, despite his fears, underlined the themes of courage and the moral imperative to protect the vulnerable.

The suspense is at its top.
We can't predict what will happen next.
Tension building.
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Review of Silent Innocence-Ch 3

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In the third chapter of "Silent Innocence", the main character, Lee Parker, struggled with the haunting memory of a disturbing dream involving a girl. He felt that there was a mark for danger. As he rode his bike to work, the weight of that dream loomed over him, creating a sense of dread and helplessness. He was acutely aware that if he were to inform the police about his premonition, he would likely become a suspect if anything were to happen to the girl. That internal conflict set a tense tone for the rest of this chapter.

Upon arriving at the gas station where he worked, Lee found his friend Paul late, which added to his frustration. Their banter disclosed their long-standing friendship, characterized by playful teasing and camaraderie. Paul’s quirky personality and appearance were highlighted, showcasing the dynamic between the two friends. The interactions with regular customers, such as Mr. Jimenez and Mrs. Hernandez, further established the small-town atmosphere and the routine nature of their work environment.As the morning progressed, Lee's thoughts continued to drift back to the dream, intensifying his anxiety. The arrival of Mrs. Huggins, a familiar customer, provided a brief distraction. Their conversation revealed personal connections within the community, particularly regarding her granddaughter's birthday.

However, the chapter takes a chilling turn when Lee glimpses a photo of a girl in Mrs. Huggins' wallet, which resembles the girl from his dream. That moment served as a crucial cliffhanger, leaving the readers with a sense of anxiety and curiosity about the connection between Lee's dream and the reality he faces.

Overall, this chapter effectively built suspense through Lee's internal struggle and the interactions that painted a vivid picture of his world. The blend of everyday life with the supernatural element of the dream created a compelling narrative that left the readers eager to uncover the truth behind the girl and the implications of Lee's premonition.

It is truly a very interestingly built chapter.
What will happen next?
I'm very eager to know that.
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Review of Where Words come to Life

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It is another wonderful poem by the poet.This poem, "Where Words Come to Life" encapsulated the enchanting journey of writing and the profound impact of imagination.It began by illustrating the mystical origins of writing, suggesting that it emerged from a hidden kingdom where creativity flourished. The imagery of pages filling as the poet closed their eyes conveyed a sense of inspiration that arrived like wishes, stressing the fact of the magical nature of storytelling.This particular poem highlighted the enduring power of beloved literary characters, such as Peter Pan and Mary Poppins, whose words seemed to transcend time and space. The connection to those iconic figures to the fact that the idea that literature could transport the readers to fantastical places, much like the eloquent prose of Mark Twain. The reference to a magic hourglass and rainbow sands created a vivid picture of time's fleeting nature, suggesting that moments of inspiration are precious and should be cherished.Happy opportunity played a significant role in the poem, as it suggested that those who were open to the wonders of literature would be rewarded with delightful experiences. The imagery of laying one's head on a fairy pillow and embarking on adventures beneath whimsical skies painted a picture of escapism and joy found in reading. The garden of literary joy, filled with untouched books, symbolized the innocence and purity of discovering new stories.Ultimately, this specific poem conveyed that writing is a divine gift to us. The readers are waiting to read it. It also celebrated the journey of believers who ventured into uncharted lands filled with fantastical beings and complex characters.The closing lines served as an invitation to the readers to promise that a ticket to extraordinary adventures awaited them, and reinforced the idea that literature is a gateway to limitless possibilities.It is another classic poem.Continue your majestic creation endlessly.Have a nice, creative time.
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Review of a written love

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This particular poem explored the complicated relationship between love and time. That poem also presents a cyclical and expansive view of both concepts. It stressed how love developed into a written form, suggesting that the act of writing captured and preserved the essence of love across generations. The repetition of phrases like "a written love" and "a written century" indicated the idea that love, when documented, transcends the immediate moment and becomes part of a larger narrative that might span our times.

This philosophical poem also did a deep inspection into the idea of time intertwined with love. It suggested that the passage of time is not purely a backdrop but an active participant in the creation and expansion of love. The phrase "the making of love is the making of time" highlighted this connection, indicating that love shaped our understanding and experience of time, while time, in turn, influenced how love is perceived and expressed.

Moreover, this philosophical poem's structure, with its repetitive and rhythmic quality, mirrored the themes of continuity and expansion. That was a stylish choice, reinforcing the idea that love and time are not static; they are dynamic forces that grow and evolve together. The concluding lines, which repeated the journey of time leading to a "written love," encapsulated the essence of the poem, suggesting that through the act of writing, love achieves a form of immortality, allowing it to be revisited and cherished across the ages.

Overall, the poem presented a keen meditation on the interplay between love and time, inviting readers to reflect on how their own experiences of love are shaped by the passage of time.
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Review of the eye of the tiger

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This particular poem is a philosophical poem, exploring the complex relationship between perception, morality, and identity through the recurring motif of the "eye of the tiger.", presenting the tiger as a symbol of both power and danger, indicating that the way one understood the tiger could reflect deep-rooted truths about human nature and societal norms. It expressed the duality of the tiger's eyes, associating that with criminal activities that should be strictly prohibited, which invited the readers to consider how societal labels could shape one's identity.This philosophical poem also dug into the concept of the "beholder," indicating that concept was subjective and could vary based on individual experiences and societal context. The intertwining of the tiger with criminal activities recommended that those who are marginalized or deemed "forbidden" often share a commonality with the fierce and wild nature of the tiger. This connection raised questions about the nature of law and morality, hinting that what was deemed forbidden may not inherently be wrong but rather a reflection of societal constructs.Furthermore, this philosophical poem's structure, with its repetitive and cyclical nature, mirrored the ongoing struggle between freedom and restriction. The use of the word "forbid" highlighted the tension between desire and societal constraints, suggesting that the act of forbidding can itself be a form of oppression.Ultimately, the poem invited readers to reflect on their own perceptions and the societal narratives that shape their understanding of identity, morality, and the nature of the "forbidden.
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Review of Dead Steps

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This poem presented a vivid exploration of nighttime disturbances and the frustration they could cause.

It began with the narrator's experience of a persistent tapping sound at witching hour, which was described as frightful and vindictive. That tapping, originating from the roof, disrupted the teller's dreams and peace, leading to a sense of annoyance and a desire to confront the source of the noise.

As the poem progressed, the narrator's thoughts turned to the possibility that the noise was purely the playful antics of a neighbor's child. That realization shifted the focus from a supernatural disturbance to a more boring, yet equally irritating, cause. The speaker's frustration was directed towards the child's father, who allowed his son to play outside at such an inappropriate time, thus robbing the teller of much-needed sleep.

The narrative took a darker turn with the mention of a funeral, suggesting that the child’s nighttime escapades had come to an end, perhaps due to the father's passing. That shift introduced a complicated layer of emotion, as the speaker expressed relief at the cessation of the noise but also hinted at a deeper reflection on loss and the implications of the child's absence.

In the concluding lines, the narrator returned home, eager to find solace and peace. However, the discovery of footprints on the ceiling left an unsettling impression, suggesting that the disturbances might not be entirely over. That final image evoked a sense of lingering uneasiness, leaving the readers to ponder the boundaries between reality and imagination, as well as the impact of external disturbances on one's inner peace.

Overall, the poem effectively captured the tension between the desire for peace and the interruptions of life, blending humour with a touch of melancholy. The speaker's journey from annoyance to contemplation highlighted the complexities of human experience, particularly in relation to sleep, disturbance, and the echoes of loss.

We can't forget this poem easily.
Creation should be going on.
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Review of human state

Review by Bodhisattwa Parekh

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Rated: E

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The philosophical poem explored the complicated relationship between identity, disgrace, and the concept of being. It, the poem, presented a layered examination of how these elements intertwine within the human experience. The repeated phrases stressed the complexity of identity, suggesting that it is not only a personal construct but also a societal one, often shrouded in secrecy and shame.

The poem articulated that a "state being" served by as both a secret identity and a source of disgrace. This duality highlighted the tension between how individuals perceived themselves, and how they are perceived by society. The notion that "mankind is a disgrace of mankind" underlined a collective struggle with identity, suggesting that humanity struggled with its own shortcomings and failures.

Furthermore, this philosophical poem introduced the concept of time as a significant factor in understanding identity. It posited that time held secrets that shaped our identities and experiences, indicating that the passage of time influenced how disgrace and identity were perceived. The repetition of phrases related to time suggested a cyclical nature of these themes, reinforcing the idea that identity is not static but evolves over time.

Overall, this particular poem conveyed a deep-rooted commentary on the human condition, exploring how identity was often concealed and complicated by societal expectations and personal experiences. It invited the readers to reflect on their own identities and the hidden aspects that may contribute to feelings of disgrace or secrecy. The interplay of these themes created a rich tapestry of thought, encouraging deeper contemplation of what it means to be human.
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#4800315

Review of Sleepless

Review by Bodhisattwa Parekh

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Rated: 13+

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This short story portrayed a woman's introspective journey as she lay in bed, reflecting on her life and the memories that surrounded her. She often found herself sleepless, haunted by dreams and the sound of her husband's snoring, while the lights from passing cars illuminated her room. A framed picture of a sunny beach from her honeymoon served as a poignant reminder of happier times, evoking feelings of love and possibility that had faded over the years.As she gazed at various mementos from her past, including a mask from their honeymoon and a sculpture symbolizing love, she felt a mix of nostalgia and sadness. The memories of her vibrant youth, when she was known as "Butterfly," contrasted sharply with her current feelings of confinement and dependency on her husband. Despite her initial excitement about marriage, she had gradually surrendered her independence, leading to a sense of dissatisfaction and longing for the freedom she once enjoyed.The woman's reflections revealed a deep-seated yearning for change. She recognized the emotional toll of her situation, feeling trapped in a cocoon of her own making. The realization that her marriage had stifled her spirit prompted a crucial moment of clarity. The phrase "The time has come" echoed in her mind, signalling a turning point in her life.In a decisive act of liberation, she quietly prepared to leave, gathering her savings and dressing with purpose. As she took one last look at the memories that had both comforted and confined her, she stepped out into the night, feeling a newfound sense of confidence and determination.

The story concluded with her departure, symbolizing a break from the past and a hopeful step toward reclaiming her identity and freedom.

Wow! What a compact story it is!
We enjoy it wholeheartedly.
Continue your majestic spell of writing.
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#4800303

Review of Silent Innocence-Ch 2

Review by Bodhisattwa Parekh

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Rated: 13+

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In the second chapter, the main character experienced a vivid dream that lingered in his mind, blurring the lines between reality and imagination. This point should be noted. As it works later purposefully.That dream, while unsettling, was not unusual for him, as he had a history of prophetic dreams that occasionally came true. His friend Samantha, who often interrupted his morning routine, displayed a mix of ridicule and genuine concern for his well-being, highlighting their close relationship. He, the prime character, this reluctance to share the details of his dream with her, suggested a desire to protect her from his worries.The narrative then shifted to provide a glimpse into the protagonist's family background. He reflected on his father's hard work in the coal mines and metal shops and the impact of his father's diabetes on their lives. The father’s declined health and death created complications related to his illness, which he recounted with a sense of loss and responsibility. He, the protagonist, had taken on the role of caretaker for his younger brother after their parents' divorce, which added to the weight of his circumstances.As the chapter progressed, the writer represented the protagonist's current life with Samantha. They lived in a modest apartment filled with secondhand furniture, stressing their financial struggles but also the support they received from friends and family. His job at a convenience store provided a semblance of stability, yet he remained aware of the challenges they faced.The chapter concluded with the protagonist preparing for work, indicating a routine that was both mundane and necessary for survival. His interaction with Samantha and the reflections on past life's picture had painted nicely of resilience amidst hardship, setting the stage for potential developments in both his personal life and the implications of his prophetic dreams.
The suspense on the top.
What will happen next?
We are eagerly waiting for the incoming chapters.
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#4800079

Review of amazingly a genius

Review by Bodhisattwa Parekh

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Rated: E

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This particular poem explored the interconnectedness of concepts such as brightness, time, genius, and amazement, weaving them into a philosophical reflection on the nature of existence and potential. It focused on the idea that brightness symbolized a hopeful future, suggesting that a "bright" future is not that it was not far away from us. So, the aspiration grew fast but also an inherent quality of time and genius. The repetition of phrases stressed the cyclical relationship between these elements, indicating that time itself was a manifestation of genius, and that genius was a product of time.

This philosophical poem also tried to search into the notion of amazement, linking it to both brightness and timeliness. That suggested that amazement was not just a fleeting emotion but a deeper understanding of the brilliance that surrounds us. The phrase "amaze is brightly amazing" encapsulated the idea that true amazement comes from recognizing the inherent brightness in our experiences.

Moreover, this poem examined the relationship between man and his genius, positing that genius and time shaped humanity. The lines indicated that a "man made of a genius" is a reflection of the time in which he exists, suggesting that our identities and capabilities are influenced by the temporal context. This interplay between man, genius, and time highlighted the philosophical inquiry into what it means to be human and how our potential is realized through the lens of time.

Overall, the poem presented a rich tapestry of ideas that encouraged reflection on the nature of existence, the potential for greatness, and the profound connections between time, genius, and the human experience. It invited readers to consider how these elements shape their understanding of the future and their place within it.
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#4800073

Review of Sunrise

Review by Bodhisattwa Parekh

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Rated: 13+

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This short story complicatedly wove elements of fantasy, mystery, and the supernatural, creating an absorbing narrative that explored themes of memory, identity, and the unknown.

The narrator's early morning run along the seashore served as a symbol for his internal struggle and quest for clarity amidst confusion. The rhythmic sound of his feet in the shallow water symbolized the passage of time and the cyclical nature of his experiences, while the setting itself on the beach acted as a liminal space between reality and the fantastical.

The hero of this story struggled with fragmented memories, particularly concerning his family and his past. His uncertainty about his marital status and the existence of his children highlighted a deeper existential crisis. The key he discovered in the sand served as a crucial symbol, representing both potential and the mysteries that lay beyond the surface of his consciousness. The act of finding the key and the subsequent door he encountered introduced a supernatural element, suggesting that there were hidden dimensions to his reality that he has yet to explore.

As he opened the door, the emptiness behind it and the shimmering colours reminiscent of stars evoked a sense of longing for something greater than himself. That moment encapsulated the story's exploration of the unknown and the allure of possibilities that lay beyond the familiar. The protagonist's decision to reach through the door, despite his confusion, signified a willingness to confront the unknown, a theme that resonated throughout the narrative.

Upon returning to the shore, the main character experienced a shift in perception, as the sea and the world around him appeared transformed. This change reflected his evolving understanding of his identity and the realization that he was alone, which was both liberating and disconcerting. The final encounter with the woman and children at breakfast served as a poignant moment of connection, suggesting that while he might have lost parts of his past, new relationships and experiences awaited him.

Overall, the story masterfully blended elements of fantasy and mystery to explore intense themes of self-discovery and the nature of reality. The protagonist's journey was not just a physical one along the beach but also a metaphorical exploration of his psyche, inviting the readers to ponder the complexities of memory, identity, and the infinite possibilities that life presents. The narrative left a lingering sense of wonder, encouraging reflection on the mysteries that lie both within and beyond our understanding.

It's truly a marvellous short story.
Continue your majestic writing performance.
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