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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It is another exciting chapter of this adventure fiction. Skrie and her team now in a rabbit hole.
The collapsed stairway led to catacombs below, where the party encountered traps and undead creatures. They devised a plan to defend themselves against approaching cultists, using oil and fire to their advantage. Exploring further, they discovered unique undead creatures and mysterious poisonous substances. The party encountered challenges but managed to overcome them together, showcasing their resourcefulness and teamwork in the face of danger. The adventure continued as they uncovered more secrets and dangers lurking in the underground tunnels.
But, what will happen next?
We have to wait for the next chapter.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
From the outline of the action-packed mystery is a perfect thriller, full of suspense. The main character of the story is Amy, a single mom of three kids, Bree, Joy, and Michael, living in Salt Lake City, Utah.
The day began in a typical morning routine for Amy. As school was going to start, Amy prepared her kids. Bree was reluctant to go to school without her mom, who was her rock since their dad had left. Despite a flat tire on the way to work, Amy was saved by a kind stranger named Lakota, who offered her a ride. He even asked her out on a dinner date, surprising Amy. After a successful day at work, Amy received flowers and a note from Lakota, igniting excitement in her life. She shared the news with her best friend Martha, who immediately planned a shopping spree to prepare Amy for her date. Despite Amy's reluctance, Martha insisted, determined to make her friend feel like a beauty queen. The story ended with Amy reluctantly agreeing to the shopping spree. It set the stage for a new chapter in her life filled with surprises and possibilities.
It's a very positive and efficient end.
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Review of A Word  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What can the words do? This is the subject of the thesis, which is very fascinating and relevant.
Can words just be as harmful as sticks and stones? Or these have other works to do!
This site serves various purposes, from entertainment to education, but it can also be a disappointing experience. The system, driven by money, favours paid members, leaving others feeling excluded. Despite this, we share our stories to show that we are more than just our experiences. Some users, like me, face issues with disabled features and deleted emails without explanation. Attempts to access the site from different IP addresses reveal font restrictions, making it difficult to read. Even long-term users are not immune, as a friend with a 3-year account was inexplicably deleted. This cautionary tale highlights the unpredictable nature of site administration and serves as a warning for others facing similar frustrations.
Undoubtedly, this thesis raises a vital issue.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a brilliant piece of monologue that is written by the writer. Sales personnel's problem is a burning of today's world. They come and knock on the door. Through the comedy genre, the writer expresses this serious issue.
One Saturday afternoon, my nap was interrupted by frantic knocks on my door, transforming a lovely dream into a nightmare of being buried alive. Surprised, I found a Girl Scout selling cookies, leading to a dilemma over disclosing my splurge. Reflecting on unexpected visitors, I questioned timing and cookie geniuses. Despite interruptions by campaigners, charity seekers, and salesmen, the days of tangible salesmen with dusty encyclopaedias seem far gone. Today's salesmen lack items to sell, leaving me longing for an advanced solar panel pitch. Frustrated, I pondered why my fierce guard dog, Chase, welcomed visitors with a wagging tail over confronting them. Understanding his weakness for cookies, I found myself out of treats just as I heard another knock at the door, prompting Chase's disappearance.
In an interesting way, the author finishes it.
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Review of Into the Ruin  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Skrie and her team now in another adventure fiction.
They cautiously entered a ruined temple and encountering cultists and a giant spider. Malusk battled the spider, while Skrie and the others fought off skeletons. After a tough battle, they managed to defeat the enemies. Theren discovered a hidden chamber with ancient hero plaques that triggered the opening of a secret compartment. As they examined the contents, including stories of legendary figures, their exploration continued.
We can't predict what will happen next.
So, the suspense continues.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It is another interesting episode of this adventure fiction.
Upon returning to Nemeademore, Skrie and her team sorted the recovered items into magical and mundane categories. Theren worked on identifying magical items while Skrie scouted and hunted for food. He discovered human and undead tracks heading towards the village, prompting concern. Theren excitedly demonstrated a horn that could awaken people with a spoken name. The group also found healing potions and possibly poison in vials. Malusk urged them to investigate the village as instructed by the wraith they encountered.
Observing the ruined village from a distance, they spotted a cultist commanding undead creatures. The cultist led the undead towards the ruins, then back out again. The group decided to move closer to the temple for a better view. They noted that only certain buildings were destroyed by the fire, likely the homes of the villagers. Skrie doubted the villagers would return if the situation remained the same. Realizing the futility of counting cultists, they knew they needed to explore the ruins promptly. What will happen next?
We are anxiously waiting for the incoming chapter.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is another great rhyming poetry by the poet.

Once a town destroyed in chaos and ruin, lives lost in flames. Victims include angels in heaven, families in despair. People flee fires, pets and homes lost. Prayers offered for those in grief. Endless task to rebuild, a horror we face.

You may it is ask, it's a sad poem, it should be a free-verse, it shouldn't not be a rhyming poetry.

But we see closely, you will observe that atfer an utter destruction, prayer for the sufferers and rebuilding processes are going on. So, the poetry ends with positivity that is necessary for our social-developments.

ln every life, there a lot of ups and downs. After a failure, this rebuilding process is required urgent basis. Otherwise, the life will be meaningless.

It's a great poetry.

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Review of Garrick's Tale  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It's another interesting episode of this adventure fiction.
Garrick woke up Malusk and Skrie, telling them about the horrifying events he witnessed in the village. He saw Maze and the villagers being attacked by cultists and undead creatures. He fought off some of them, but eventually had to retreat. Furthermore, he mentioned encountering a walking skeleton in an old battleground, where he also saw cultists looting and burning the village.

Garrick informed them that the cultists were after something, possibly a key, and they were heading towards them. Skrie had a vision of an elf spirit telling them to return the key to prevent further destruction. Following her guidance, the party found a temple on a hill, where they placed a silver box recovered from the cultists.

Inside the temple, they discovered a room with sarcophagi and a mural depicting a battle with the undead. A ghostly figure appeared, urging them to return the key and warning of impending danger. The figure pointed them towards the ruins at Nemeadamore.

Realizing they were being pursued by undead and cultists, the group decided to avoid the road and travel west to evade their pursuers. They took rest in a cave by a river gorge, where they sorted through their acquired magical and mundane items.

As they prepared to continue their journey, the looming threat of the cultists and undead remained, urging them to find a way to return the key and avert disaster. The group knew they had to face the dangers ahead and confront the evil forces that were after them.
What will happen next?
To know that, we have to wait for the next chapter.
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Review of A Summer Plea  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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It is a very common experience in summer for south Asian hot countries and in a desert area. The scene beautifully draws an image of summer.
This poetry fulfils all the characteristics of an ideal traditional Japanese Haiku. Line number, syllable per line(5-7-5) are followed nicely. The main purpose of a Haiku, to draw a scene. That has been done beautifully. It is a scene of any summer days.
A great artistry is there.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is another interesting chapter in this adventure fiction. Skrie and her team observed the village from a hilltop, A group of relics needed recovery. But how? The proper planning was going on under leadership of Skrie. They successfully recovered relics from a tower guarded by cultists. Skrie detected a trap in the tower as they entered. They found ritual items and a glowing book. As they retrieved the relics, they were attacked by skeletons that they managed to defeat with magic. They also killed a priest who stumbled upon them. After packing up the relics, they left the village, avoiding detection by the guards. They saw cultists entering the tower and decided to leave the area quickly. Riding through the forest on Malusk's shoulders, they made their way to meet Geordo on the trade road. However, they encountered more cultists and undead along the way, managing to defeat them in ambushes. They camped for the night, observing a fire in the distance. The next day, they continued their journey, wary of any further encounters with cultists.
What will happen next?
We're waiting eagerly for the next chapter.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
“A Bridge to Today: An Excellent Tomorrow” is another inspirational and family-themed poetry that urges readers to work hard and stay with preparation to be thankful. Comfort leads to neutrality, followed by moments of ecstasy and clarity. The poem emphasizes the importance of purposeful actions and honesty, seeking meaningful connections and overcoming challenges. Life's journey is compared to skating a triple lutz with earnestness, working diligently to help others succeed and exploring unique and joyful experiences. Loyalty guides us through the journey of life, shaping our interactions with others and our overall outlook for our existence. It is an excellent poem that shows us the proper direction in our lives.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Investigating the cultists, Skrie and her team observed a gruesome scene in the village.They witnessed three men being resurrected as undead creatures by a priest in black and red robes, accompanied by acolytes.The group realized that the cultists were using dark magic to replace their workers with undead minions.As they continued to spy on the village, they noticed armed guards searching for villagers, with one group heading towards a nearby farm present.
Suspense is extreme.
What will happen next?
We have to wait for the next episode to appear.
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Review of Relocation  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Though Skrie and her team rescued the villagers from the cultists, relocating them was another tough task. It should be done very carefully; otherwise, they and the villagers would suffer seriously. Under the leadership of Skrie, they took necessary arrangements. She knew that everything began to worsen after a lady's appearance. The descriptions were known, but is she? That would remain unclear until she sees it with her own eyes. What will happen next? We can't predict. So the countdown begins for the next episode.
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Review of On the Other Side  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is an extraordinary poetry by the poet. It tells us about the power of true love. If two souls are able to connect with each other, none can dislocate them. Despite belonging to two different classes or any other issues that may be there and can create physical distance between them, they remain close to one another mentally. She also lives in the poet's heart. So, there is no power that can create any sort of distance between them at any moment.
It is truly a superb creation.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In this chapter of this adventure fiction, we witnessed how Skrie and her team saved villagers from the hands of brutal cultists who didn't spare the children. It was not an easy task. However, Skrie's application of intelligence made it easier. Her wisdom works perfectly. Fortune always favors the brave. It proves once again in this chapter.
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Review of The orb  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a wonderful science fiction short story. It is very compact and realistic and never tries to be anything extra. It has a very tragic end. The scientists who were involved in this research were not able to remain normal, so the mystery behind it remains unsolved. There is no way to solve it again. It is an extremely good beginning. A bright future is waiting for you. Keep writing.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It's one of the best monologues I have ever read. In 2012, the UN/USAID built a water-pumping station in Mali, Africa, the second poorest nation in the world. The teller was part of this team as an engineer. He observed the unthinkable poverty level of that nation. The children stopped playing and stood patiently there for a piece of bread! Can it be conceivable in any other civilized country? He felt for them and did what he could for them. He saw how poverty took the life of a child, untimely loss of a future prospect. He wants to raise awareness about those in need.
It's an excellent writing effort.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Skrie and her team arrived at the spot. They were confident but cautious. Being the leader of the side, she made a thoughtful strategy and drew a map. How did they save the Hin Prisoners? That was not an easy task. They performed their best and saved them successfully.
That was not the end of their jobs. They needed to rescue the villagers.
That would be a tough task. Even the children were unsafe. The Hin people will help them to reach there.
Then? What will happen? Will the villagers be rescued or not? A great suspense is there.
To know everything, we have to wait for the next episode.
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Review of Flash fiction  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a tiny bit excellent poem. Faustus is the hero of several medieval legends and later literary and operatic works, a philosopher who sells his soul to the devil in exchange for knowledge and power. A thirst for knowledge was there. But the teller was not a knowledge-tycoon like him. She is a general public who believes in God and wants to live a peaceful life. So she will not sell her soul to anyone.
It's a short but meaningful poem that can touch our hearts. Continue the gem in future, too.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Skrie and her team begin a new adventure under the sponsorship of the old merchant Geordo. They opt for the old road. The first day remains problem-free. Who knows, the day may turn out to be the opposite? Yes, on that day, they found a few people busy with a conspiracy. Skrie heard their discussion. They were cultists. Their attitude was descriptive. Skrie decided to stop their plans.
But how?
We have to wait until the next chapter appears.
The beginning is very interesting.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is another good poetic work by the poet. There always remains a few social disbalancing tendencies, which are planted by both sides of political leaders. These may be unintentional but happen. Beware of these headaches. Try to avoid those. It's great advice.
I especially like the last line: "Govern with plastic, since glass is a joke...". It tells the summary of the whole poetry.
It is a great job.
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Review of Confessions  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It's truly an important part of this adventure fiction. In this part, Aquila appeared dramatically and met Skrie. After a conversation with her, Skrie and her team agreed to work with old merchant Geordo. He also liked that and came into a settlement. Thus, a fresh beginning started with full energy.
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Review of Siren  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poetry told us a sad story, but it explained beautifully and created an enormous attraction. It was a one-sided love story. He mesmerized with her beauty, and a love story began from the first sight. He knocked the door of her heart several times, but it didn't have any effect on her. That may happen in our lives. But, she betrayed him brutally and turned him into the corridor of death. Even after death, he could listen to that siren which was the cause of his death.
It is a fantastic story-based poetry from a newbie author.
You're mature enough. Keep writing.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It's another very important poetry for us. Without the proper guidance from the highest authority, a nation can't prosper. Especially after COVID, we realize this fact more prominently. Except a few countable nations, others suffer due to lack of appropriate leadership. America sets an example to the rest of the world. Others should follow it and learn what miracles can be done through disciplined effort.
It is an inspirational poem that show us way how to recover from that unwanted period.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It's a nice adventure fiction going on. However, it has a lot of diversity. We knew from the previous chapter that Skrie and she would visit the old merchant Geordo. In this chapter, we see that they do the same. However, they are confronted by their employer. Despite this, experienced Theren keeps his cool and apologizes to Geordo. He tells him that he will talk to them when they are in the inn. Skrie listens to that conversation from outside the camp. What will happen next? We are anxiously waiting for the next chapter.
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