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Review of Ambush  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Skrie became slightly wounded in the old merchant's wagon but can ultimately survive. Not only did she survive, but the entire team also did, even though they had a few injuries. Skrie didn't know how Geordo was. Was he all right or not? She and her team prepared well to combat the evil powers and started their journey towards the old man's camp.
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Review of Noticing Newbies  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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It is a wonderful forum. It is an ideal platform for interacting with seniors and newbies. Through this beautiful community, a newcomer can explain the difficulties they face. The seniors extend their helping hands to them, and the problems are solved immediately. From my personal experiences, it has helped me a lot. This is the forum where newbies gain maturity. It is one of The StoryMistress 's noble deeds, for which we should carry in our hearts and remain grateful to her for this forum. Enjoy the forum too much.
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Review of Foiling An Ambush  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
We saw in the previous chapter that Skrie and her friends decided to return the ring to Geordo. We hoped that Geordo would be happy. However, we see something unexpected in this chapter. On the way to the wagon, Skrie observed the signs of some pairs of legs that went to the wagon but never returned. Unexpectedly, Geordo and his team attacked them, but they were prepared to handle it. Skrie and her friends inflicted heavy damage. Geordo and his team will take time to make up for the loss.
What will happen next? We don't know the answer but will wait for the next episode with a lot of interest.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It is another interesting episode. A new character makes an entry in the story. She is none other than the priestess Veronda, a mysterious personality. However, it is revealed that the ring was involved in black magic, and she tried to take it from them but Skrie's intelligence prevented that from happening. Skrie, Malusk, and Theren decided to return the ring to Geordo as soon as possible.
This part of the adventure story is very interesting and full of suspense.
We must appreciate the writer's efforts.
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Review of Toressa  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It's simply a beautiful lyric that tells us a love story of extreme level. The love between the teller and Toressa is true love. Their souls join together. Therefore, the narrator can carry her in his heart everywhere. So, there is no scope of their detachment. He describes her beauty like a poet. Artistry is present. Even while sleeping, he feels her existence though she is far away from him. It is possible as their souls are tightly bonded.
Overall, it's a great love song.
Write on!
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Review of Bad Juju  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
They had two different opinions whether that ring returned to Geordo or not. There told them to return it to that old marchent, but Skrie didn't agree with that advice. She wanted to inspect thoroughly to mystery behind it. She has doubt in mind that there may be some evil power involve with it. So, discover the truth was necessary.
Suspense all around.
What will happen next?
Write on!
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Review of Afterthoughts  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It is a very vital part of this adventure fiction. Skrie saw the blue aura surrounding the jewelry. What was that? She must search the actual reason for that. After that, she will return the jewelry to the old merchant, Geordo. Was it just magic or something else? Skrie must know the truth. The chapter is full of suspense and mystery.
It's an entertaining episode.
Write on!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
In, We should look forward to a brighter and promising future. That route will not be easy. We should take proper preparation to face those. Those will be hard, but not impossible. If you want to get success at the top level, that always remain taut. But, if you make an honest try, you will be successful.
So, the poet inspires us to follow the same.
It's an excellent poem.
Write on!
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
First part, three teenage girls - Sweetie Belle, Apple Bloom, and Scootaloo lived in the same hostel and attended the same school. Therefore, a friendship between them is quite normal and happens naturally. They had a sweet relationship and even spent weekends together.

There is another part of the story. Today, we create a bunch of entertainment. Erotic phases, which are opposite to spirituality, are also present in our material world. It is dark but real and a source of different kinds of entertainment. It exists parallel to spirituality and is depicted beautifully and vividly.
It's a superb effort by the writer.
Write on!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Especially after the COVID period, situations are deteriorating daily. Only a few countries can recover from that situation. America sets an example to the rest of the world on how to control unrest and establish a peaceful, organized, and united movement. This should help you move forward. Otherwise, your nation will regress. That is the prime objective of the poem, to show us how we, as a whole planet, can settle as best as possible. It's a nice and inspiring poem. Write on!
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Review of Narrow Escape  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This chapter tells us how narrowly Skrie escaped from a certain death. Here, fortune favored the brave. Why did Skrie take care of the ring in the previous chapter? The answer we get in this chapter. It had divine and magical powers. It can't harm anybody. Skrie had those qualities. The enemy attacked her to get that ring. Now, the magical power of the ring has been shown that helped her escape. That scene was very dramatic. I hope that the upcoming parts will be very interesting.
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Review of The Ring  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It is another interesting part of the adventure fiction. Skrie used her presence of mind. The situation wasn't favourable. So, she protected the ring as a valuable treasure. She dropped it into the dirt and covered it with her foot. It should have any speciality. So, she took special care for its protection. That also proved that she is intelligent, which increased the possibility of her success in the mission.
We must concentrate on what will happen next.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Skrie and Malusk, as usual, took their breakfast together, and that old man, uncle of Aquila, came and began to chat with them. A young elf arrived. We understand that Aquila has yet to be captured. The young elf came to help them. They started their adventure to track three persons. They were able to track them, but it wasn't an easy job.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It is another exciting chapter of this adventure fiction where Skrie and Malusk were searching for Aquila and the treasures of that old man, which Aquila took with her. At first, Aquila was not interested in returning, but when her company was defeated by the magical power of Skrie, she had to change her mind and decided to go back to the old man.
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Review of Precious  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It is another interesting part of this adventure fiction. Skrie and Malusk met an old merchant. He came here with his niece, Aquila, for business purposes. However, she left him while he was asleep. He could identify the man who was with her, but he didn't have any proof in hand. He offered Skrie and Malusk a generous gift. They also decided to accept the challenge.
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Review of Arrivals  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In this part of adventure fiction named 'Arrivals', Skrie meets a young halfling named Malusk. Most probably, Malusk will become her true friend; the indication is there. At least, Skrie likes Malusk and intimacy begins. Whether Malusk will become a true friend or not, only the future will tell.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Every day, the opportunities for desk work services are decreasing. However, the opportunities for business jobs and marketing jobs are increasing on a daily basis. By achieving high performance, you can earn as much as you want. Therefore, careers in sales and marketing jobs are like beehives nowadays. These jobs are target-oriented. They are not suitable for everybody, but if it suits you, you will soon be at the top. Focus on this type of challenging job. The poet inspires you to do so.
These types of poems show us ways to build our careers. Write on!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It will be interesting to see an interactive story unfold. The situation seems fully prepared with all its ingredients. However, it is still too early to make any comments after just 28 chapters of an interactive story. But it seems poised to deliver something good. The main character is Bowser, and the story will revolve around him and his activities. I definitely understand this fact quite well.
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Review of The Hunter  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello writer, It's a brilliant story, mainly based on suspense. Your sense of using fantasy and folklore is beautiful. You mix those concepts well. Especially, the concept of Demigod has been applied nicely. They found a Syrian spell which was used to summon a Rakshasa Queen. Overall, it's an exciting story that tells us both evil and better forces reside here. People choose them according to their mentality. Overall, it is a notable performance. Write on!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear poet,
You have created another gem of a poetry. It is a rhyming poetry. How does God’s love give a feeling of strength, peace, and joy? This is the subject of the poetry.
God always takes care of us. He wants a peaceful society. So, all devoted people want to lead a joyful life with peace and prosperity. Though the control of loans remains in Christ's hand. Therefore, we can be alive peacefully.
What an excellent poetry.
Write on!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great job, Writer! It is a good start to the novel. The main character of the story is none other than Ryuk, a boy who finds a mysterious box. What is inside the box? That answer is not given. But the storyteller tells us that the box will change his life. We don't know if the change will be positive or negative. The chapter ends here. We have to wait for the next chapter to know the answer.

The sense of closing a chapter is truly admirable. In today's South Asian nations, ragging is a burning issue, especially in educational institutions. Older students rag new students. In some cases, this is too violent. Death has even occurred in a few cases. The writer sheds light on this social curse.
Your writing style is very appealing and touches our hearts.
Keep writing!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi! Poet,
It is a fantastic Japanese Haiku that draws the image of a blue moon night. It fulfils all the characteristics of an ideal Japanese Haiku.
our souls are mournful in the earth. The bright blue moon night is enough to wake them again.
It is a classic performance.
Write on!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
First, I pray to God for the departed soul of the writer. How did the Lighthouse create? What is it activities? These have been described here in detail.
Once, there was no Lighthouse. The ships felt danger in sea due to the lack of light at night.
To avoid those accidents, the Lighthouse established in the 250 B.C. It was 45 storied tall. It stayed 1500 years until a serious earthquake destroyed it. The Next Lighthouse established at the beginning of the 18th century. But, caretakers lived their lonely life until they retired or died. It's pathetic information.
We can't see her any further creation. It is painful for us.


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Review of Mirrored  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi! Friend,
You are most welcome in our community. Your style of writing is really superb indeed. You are a compact and experienced author, I easily can understand this. Don't you?
In a mirror, we can see our image where we see ourselves, who resides in our subconscious mind.
The conflict between the real me and the present me is nicely present here that makes it so interesting. This dwell has never ended. We will last forever.
With these, the life must be at its pace. We just need some adjustments.
It's a great beginning.
Keep writing.


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Review of The Scary Dark  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi! Writer,
It is a very fascinating short story that tells us about the writer's efficiency. Two terrifying moments. Fortunately, these are not realistic. But it also proves that there is a serious fear-psychosis in her subconscious mind, which cannot create without reason. That remains untold.
The author can create suspense well. The story contains the proof.
I hope, we will see you regularly.
Keep writing.


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