This is a very well-written review. The first stanza sets up the rest of the poem. Man needs to humble himself in order to gain wisdom. The second stanza evokes a strong feeling of wonder. The final stanza, as it should, clarifies the message of the poem. My criticism is twofold. First, the beginning of the second stanza, as I mentioned before, is that it evokes a strong feeling of wonder. That is great, but I think the poem would be stronger if you could make the reader perceive a greater feeling of wonder, compelling them to speculate what are behind these great things. Secondly, at the end of the second stanza, I think it'd work better if you deleted the phrase "and for human beings".
B.M.
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/bmccaf10
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.09 seconds at 6:10am on Nov 24, 2024 via server WEBX2.
View Portfolio
Visit Notebook
Send Gift Points
Awards
Badges
Send Email
Community Newsfeed
General Discussion
Sponsored Items
Book of Trinkets
Static Items
Books
Groups
Interactive Stories
Audio
Campfire Creatives
Community Notes
Crossword Puzzles
Documents
Folders
Images
In & Outs
Madlibs
Photo Albums
Polls
Product Reviews
Quizzes
Survey Forms
Web Pages
Word Searches
