I really like how you've portrayed a very sublime truth here about our existence. Your law of two's fits my own philosophy perfectly: That it is this realm of duality that we learn the most in. We understand love better, because we can see hate. Darkness because of light. Good because of evil. Pain because of pleasure. Man because of woman.
You summed it up very succinctly. Your poem drew me in from the first word.
Nice cadence, good word flow. Easy to understand your points. They are now added to my view of existence.
Well, I love this one to. It speaks to a place I've been, so many times. It's just right out there on the page. So simple to see, so easy to read, so ready to disect the truth from it.
I not only thank you for your fine,sensitive writing. But I also thank you for helping me understand a part of my heart better
I've said it before, but you really have a lovely balance between cadence, word, and thought. Very easy to read.
There are many things I love about women and their perspective on life. Many loves of mine, in times of tragedy, or turmoil, such as breaking up, have come out with the most eloquent descriptions of the events, in very few words, like poetry really.....from their feminine emotional perspective.
Generally speaking, I believe, we men tend to be much more analytical in our approach to problem solving. Women seem more prone to going right to the core of emotion to crack the code of understanding
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I find this in your work. I'm guessing that you are a seasoned writer. There is a relevant cadence skipping along with your words and thoughts, and a comfortable use, but not over-use, of rhyme, throughout your poems. I wonder if you enjoy Rumi or Hafiz?
I am neither a seasoned writer, or reader, or reviewer. But I recognize that feeling you get when you look at a beautiful piece of art, a wonderfully balanced piece of architecture, or a wonderfully sculpted group of words and thoughts. The feeling that there is a harmony between all the elements of the expression of the idea.
Looking forward to reading the rest of your works over time.
This is the second of your poems that I've read. I love poetry, and i really like the balance in your work. By balance, I mean that it is not over-written. The words have the same weight as the ideas you are expressing. I find that is a common failing in a lot of amateur poetry. Usually too much weight given to the words themselves. You have a fine simplicity to your work that leaves the reader the opportunity to experience the raw human emotions that you are portraying. I also found this in your Contemplative Me poem, which I will re-review because my account was mistakenly deleted yesterday just after I sent you a review. I'm going to check to see if you got it, and if not, i'll send it again.
I'm going to take my time reading the rest of your poems, like one would enjoy a glass of fine wine. Very nice work. Hope you continue to submit. B
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