the emotion was so vivid and the metaphors made it so much more lifelike. I love angst and this was wonderfully done. the only thing i can suggest was that i didn't really think you shold put the first letters in bold. i think its better if the reader realises the alphabet sequence themselves. check out my page later if u want im a newbie and in need of an audience. thanks
okay, there is a good chance I will cry. It was so beautiful and thoughtful. And really depressing. It was so sweet and caring. wow xx
PS. I'm a newbie, if u cud read some of my stuff that wud be appreciated thank you :)
well written, I like how it is showing of someone elses heartbreaking rather than the actual narrator which can be just as heartbreaking to say. it was really poetic and inspiring, as well as completly anghsty. I love anghst. So keep writing, I want to read more of this type of stuff
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