Short and sweet. I thought it was excellent. Great rhythm and it actually makes you step back and think. I think a lot of readers will have different ideas and thoughts that come to mind when reading this, based on their own experiences, and I think that's what is fantastic about this piece.
I thought the end of your poem was very well done. I've always enjoyed reading items that ended with a question or thought provoking idea at the end of them.
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