I thought that your story was absolutely amazing. It was well written and the plot was very good. At first, readers get the impression that the story would have been a typical teenage romance, but it wasn't at all. I also like that the beginning was very relatable and attention grabbing. The dialogue of your story was eye-catching because it was so realistic. Generally, with teenage love stories, there's really corny lines that just make you cringe, but this had me smiling the entire time. I'm really hard to impress and you've definately made an impression on me. You're a great writer, I love your work.
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