This is a cute story. This is an example of what I find refreshing about reading the work of others. I found this to be a humorous tale about the advent of the internet. It brought a smile to my face. :) I would suggest re-reading the story and correct several typographical errors that tend to take away from the story line. Overall, I would recommend this writing to others.
Good job. Write on!
Bill Piper
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