BillCampbell's (billcampbell) Reviews

Nice word usage and wonderful meter and rhyme into the interior of the poem. Then it breaks smoothly for a line. It is about the field psychology but the undertones make it very personal. It’s an outstanding poem.

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#3831965

Review of About Galaxy Guardians

Review by BillCampbell

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Ms. Populatery
I like the story idea. You write really well for your age. Please, please, please keep up the good work. You will no doubt achieve all you want if you keep being creative and writing it down. The world need that to happen.

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#3828790

Review of The Parable of the Sower.

Review by BillCampbell

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Alexi,
As you have found the finer ground, your roots grew deep; nurtured by the word.
And after living the word, you have born a great multitude of fruit. Thank you for the Gospel lesson. God Bless.

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#3823593

Review of Promised Land

Review by BillCampbell

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Alexi,
This is nice! I like the subject of course. I like the poem too. It captures your spiritual side without imposing on the reader. Good job!

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#3820712

Review of So! No! Go!

Review by BillCampbell

Rated: E

| (5.0)

I like the style. The poem is wonderfully unique.

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#3820710

Review of A Self

Review by BillCampbell

Rated: E

| (4.5)

This is good. I picture life starting as a cell and traveling into a cycle of rebirths. Cosmic!

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#3820708

Review of Stingy Jack

Review by BillCampbell

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Like it! Good story!

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#3820700

Review of Baptism of Rain

Review by BillCampbell

Rated: E

| (3.5)

I think you have captured your devotion to the Lord. It’s intense, but I feel like it needs some refinement. I know the difficulty in trying to capture such complex emotions. I wish that I could give you something useful you could use. Perhaps in your future edits you can soften the edges and dismiss anything that takes away from the heart of the piece.

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#3820695

Review of I believe in......

Review by BillCampbell

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Strange poll, but I dig it.

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#3820694

Review of Words

Review by BillCampbell

Rated: E

| (5.0)

This is a nice piece of art. It makes me think of social decay; as if all poetry were replaced with trivia from a beer napkin. I guess I don’t help because I can never recall what tense I’m speaking in, or should be speaking in. And oh boy is my grammar scary.
It makes me think, and I can use that. Nice poem!

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#3819831

Review of Truth of God

Review by BillCampbell

Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

You’ve got a good mom.