Okay, now you are speaking to my heart and my stomach. I love to write and I love to cook... it's like Reese's, two great things that go great together. Well done.
As a newbie here, I am not at all sure of the format for this so I will just jump right in.
1. I like the piece. It reads very well and your descriptive representation of the area is nicely handled.
2. Don't stop writing; anyone who "needs to write" should never quit. You have a great grasp of imagery and that is going to take you a long way.
3. As a reader, I like the piece and think it would be a great background for a short or a novel. Work with it. As a writer, I have to admit a bit of envy, those kinds of settings tend to lend themselves very well to fiction.
Keep going... I will look forward to reading more. Dan
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