Honestly i think it was abit weird but be that as it may a very good story maybe abit more description would have been good and more about before asin his past and more about the sound of course the way you ended it means you will have to do a sequil or it would ruin the story line. duh but all in all quite good any tips for me as a fantasy medi-evil time travel futristick magic mythical ect kinda writer of course i am a complete begginer
Sorry but i respect the thought but i personaly beleive i am in love i mean look at the name but i beleive that love could be the best thing in the world if those who are in it could express and explain it and if they could choose to stop it if the feeling wasnt mutal but in a way i agree with you very good keep it up also i may only be 13 but i feel like writing acting and music are my only talents as i would be a good leader if i was more inspiring and confidant and had better people skills but i dont so yeah thats why i joined this but i dont suppose you have any tips do ya? thanks
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