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Review of I Am Not a Hero  Open in new Window.
Review by LaVerne Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Wow....Very good writing...Impressive...I like it very much...Extremely creative too....
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Review by LaVerne Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
The suspense in the story prior to the love fest is good, the love fest is good. Well written. Left me believing the student dreamed the whole thing. I kept waiting for her to wake up with frustration or something. Very well written. I liked it.
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Review by LaVerne Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Very good story, liked it. The secrecy of watching the other couple was quite real.
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Review of "Can I keep it?"  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Loved the story, keeping a human as a pet is too funny and cute. Poor girl is lost and you've showed that very well and her confusion. The dialogue was also well done and I liked the plot. With that said, you'll need to review and fix the misspelled words and punctuation. Very good story, keep up the writing, I really enjoyed reading it. :))
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Review by LaVerne Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
The story is emotional. It depicts life in real form, an experience that is all too familiar with our world. The butterfly was extremely touching, I liked it. I could feel the pain.

Some reviews need to be made, I was confused as to if it was the mother or the father visiting the little girl and some misspelling.

Keep up the writing, and thanks for sharing yours with us.
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Review by LaVerne Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.5)
Very creative ideal, I liked it very much..Keep writing. Hope to see more of your work in the future. I found no faults with the way you wrote it..
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Review of Twilight  Open in new Window.
Review by LaVerne Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Loved the way you wrote this, your vocubulary is solid and impressive. Will look for more work from you. Please continue...
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Review by LaVerne Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
I dont know much about plays, but I really liked yours, it is true to life and men and thier buddy ways. The ending pleased with the original couple getting together even after the interference by a selfish friend. I liked the story and hope to read more in the future.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Well written, your vacabulary is great. I wish my vocabulary is as well as yours in this short story. Sad lady, but I could see into her soul the way you wrote this. And the action scenes around her were great as well.
I'll check in on your stories again.
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Review of Wall  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Very true to facts, how woman can become trapped in something that wasn't of thier own making. I like the end, she is determined to change what she had become or let happen to her over the years.
An encouraging story..
I liked it..
I think she overcomes, starts her life anew, leaving behind all that overshadowing drama that her life had become...
Inspiring.
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