\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/beowulfbrower
Review Requests: OFF
2 Public Reviews Given
2 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
1
1
Review by Beowulf Brower Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this. Short, sweet, and to the point. The ending line is a neat and strong ending. The only thing you could maybe try differently is deciding to use all punctuation or no punctuation. It's such a nice little poem that you really don't need commas or periods at all, it would also help convey the sense of it being a tweet.
1 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 1 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/beowulfbrower