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Review of The Bus  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
At the start of this story i didn`t know what to expect, buta after reading it I can say it was really a good way to point out the similarity between a divorce and when somebody close to you died, Also, the way you set this up is only making the story looking better, instead of starting with the flowers, just start with something simple, I really liked it.


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