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Review of Dream on Dreamer  Open in new Window.
Review by Beckyb Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Cool.I like your poem.it is very well writing.I think.OK.I will be honest.some of it I didn't understand,but some of it I felt like I did understand.that is why I said cool because of what went on with the dreamer,then you awake to ask if you were awake.cool.it needs a little work.I forgot which part needed work,but all in all good poem.keep it up.you will get there.
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Review of Finished  Open in new Window.
Review by Beckyb Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
I'm not sure I understand some words in this poem like bleating.Therefore I can understand the poem and your not crystal clear on what your talking about.please I know you can write better than this.be more descriptive and use the right words.you can do it.I know you can.keep writing.I believe in.you.
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Review by Beckyb Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I thought it was very descriptive,very well thought out,very well done.I want to get into short stories I hope mine are as good as this one.keep writing.you got what it takes to become a great writer.
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