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Review of Forever Yours  Open in new Window.
Review by Angel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Emotional, sad and honestly depicts the horrors of prejudice and war. Thankfully, I hope, we are living in a better place and time. I like the story and the moral, but do think that editing is needed. That said, I find your story, thought provoking. Thank you for sharing.
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Review by Angel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Truer words were never Written! Very well written and oh, so true! thanks for sharing.
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Review by Angel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
Very nice story. I love tradition and hosted thirty Christmas Eve family parties, which my married son now carries on. Thanks for sharing.
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Review by Angel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Well written. I totally understand your "cyber-friendship". I joined a support forum four years ago after surviving brain surgery. Thanks to a brain tumor, I have made friends on and off line, from all over the WORLD! I've hosted four marathons and four luncheons in the tri-state area, bringing survivors and their families together to meet, greet, eat and weep annually.(talk about meeting friends in strange places). Last May, one hundred and five people of all ages and walks of life gathered to celebrate LIFE. The founder of this organization is a published writer from Colorado. Her administrator is from Australia. These two amazing women have become my dear friends, both on and off line. Thanks to our love of writing, a lump in my head and the internet, we managed to for lifetime friendships. "What a Wonderful World"!
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Review of Dreamland  Open in new Window.
Review by Angel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very well written. you were a very "articulate and talented" twelve year old. I love it.
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Review by Angel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very nice story. Reminds me of my very shy grand-son. Well written, good visuals and serene.
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Review by Angel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is very well written and thought provoking. beautiful!
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Review by Angel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Truer words never spoken. Keep spreading this message!
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Review of Deeper  Open in new Window.
Review by Angel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Depression can be very debilitating. This poem portrays its lonliness and psychic pain dramatically. insightful!
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Review of Astonishment  Open in new Window.
Review by Angel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
I think that the poem is beautiful, but would have kept it rhyming to the end. Thought provoking.
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