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Rated: E | (5.0)
If you can't be gold, be silver. ~~ anonymous crowd person during the 2000 Olympics
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a good 5-7-5 haiku. No real issues to it, which is impressing to me. Haikus seem to be rarer on wdc but I'm glad tht you are doing one, or multiple. This in my own opinion but I feel like it is many others too.

~~Keep Writing Haikus!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
hello belive18 first of all some grammar, yay... full of energy and angry should be full of energy and anger, chance of tying, chance of dying, I think at least. last word should be choice.

Other than that It was a cool story bro, haha I had to say it. But truly it is a good poem maybe.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Though I am not a professional reviewer or anything, here are the pros and well there wasent any cons for me.

Vocabulary, Fluidity, Meaning, ABAB pattern

This is a great poem and I really enjoyed it
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