This one is tough, I started thinking you were refering to heartburn but found a reference to a burning heart instead, I believe corect me if I am wrong. I like this piece it has a pleasently sad twist to it great read and write.
This is rich, loved the repitition, you have a keen since of humor, and it is much appreciated by me and I am sure by others as well. As for this piece it is very well composed with a positive captivating flow, great read and write.
Reality defined by food set in motion by delight then consumed by lust, I like it, I believe there are two O's in scoop, of course if someone was pointing a scope at me, may it be made of chocalte, (lol)
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