I thought this was a pretty cool little story and I like the way that you made Jack become a therapist because it seems that he helping his brother John out and helping him find out what the source of his sighting was. John,I'm thinking,that he did become an explorer because he always seemed to be curious wanting to you know check things out find the source of things so I thought that was really cool. Their sister Kana following John in his explorations met a man who was also an explorer so I'm guessing that the two of them went on exploring together and possibly maybe with John as well the three of them making a good trio going on many expeditions. Good stuff thank you keep on writing!
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