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Review by batman1 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
BTW, awesome job on this short story. This was actually one of the very first stories I read up here 2 years ago, but when I tried to review it, my computer froze. After that, I sort of forgot about it when I started concentrating on the outline. Anyways, this was a major source of inspiration for me, and the story still holds up. My only major complaint is that that there isn't a Chapter One to this. This feels more like the pay-off to something that would've been set up, maybe an actual physical confrontation between Supergirl and Luthor. Either way, hopefully one day you can publish Chapter One, because I would really like to see it. :)
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Review by batman1 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Excellent addition Beethoven! I enjoyed it so much that I actually connsider it a lot better than the story I originally had. Anyways, you're more than welcome to add on to the story I've started, its great having someone give their own spin on my very long stories.
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Review by batman1 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello there if you're reading this. Yes, I am batman1 and no, I haven't permanently severed my connections with Writing.com. I just deleted my old account and made a new one. And yes, I will continue making stories, usually in weekly intervals. But if you ever get tired of waiting, feel free to pick up where I've let off, and add on to my additions. You are more than welcome to, I don't have a problem with it. Now, my account is batman4, in case you were wondering. Thanks!!!!!!!!
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