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Review of Bourbon  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I love that name for a cat! He sounds amazing - thank you for the tranquil vision of the regal rescue, Bourbon *Hug*
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Review of All the Time  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This chant is lovely and Biblical in its repetition. It says more than meets the eye!
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Review of Courtyard at Bupa  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this! I often wonder if the muse will follow me wherever I may go. Now, because of you, I know. :)
I enjoy the rhythm and the cadence of you poem very much. The "blessing" of the "fading eye", very poignant. Thank you! Write on!
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Review of The Play  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
What a cute, rollicking little rhyme! Great job!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is nice. I like the rhythm of the words. They flow and row like the characters. And, the title is perfect - a little sweet, a little mysterious! You are definitely one of my new faves! I like your style a lot.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Love it! This is exactly the way I used to get my former hubbs to do things that I knew and he knew he could do faster and better. I ground the flour and made the bread, homeschooled and make kids into respectable little people. He could do the rest!
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Review of Deception  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is pretty compelling. But, the formatting makes it hard for me to read.
I like the dialogue and hope to see more of this story.
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Review of the wall.  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this! It is very hard for me to write on command - academic writing is different, though. But, it is only when the muse overtakes like some wonderful surprise that out comes scribbling onto napkins and onto the backs of grocery receipts that *something*, that special piece I hold onto and repeat again and again. I had an old account to. Writers, I think, are always remaking themselves!
I like the part where you "confide in the outdoors" - that helps me with a lot of things, too.
And, the end "still nothing" says a lot. The "still" can mean more than one thing. Great choice!
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Review of Loves Inuendo  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I like how you explore the quiet after the storm. You don't go overboard and you say just enough. Really resonant!
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Review of I Miss  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this, Wiggy! It's so genuine and wonderful like a child's smile. What a sweet tribute all tumbling out of you!
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Review of Boss Hog Family  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
LOL - J.E., great great story! You have a way with the narrative. I was right there with you! Thanks for the read :)
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Review of undecided  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Very exciting! I felt like I was right there with you. Don't leave us all hanging...keep writing!
The dialogue was very believable and the writing was like a diary. Good deal.
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Review of Music to write to  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is great! Did you create this on Spotify?
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Review of I am Free  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I know this feeling, gypsie_soul - it's the best thing in the world! You articulated it very well - we are all free to fail so long as we are really trying!
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Review of I Stalk the Night  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Moody and dark. I like it a lot!
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Review of Without You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is so sweet...bittersweet. You made me cry today...
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Review of Life's Lie  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Raw and stark...I like it a lot! Great job...
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