I am sure I am wrong but is this a race of inscets and the mist bug spray? And The Stermines are human. Forgive me if I am wrong. This was a interesting subject and it had a nice flow. It sure does leave you wondering what the Stermines are and who they where exterminating. Nice job.
Great, powerful and inspiring! What a compelling story.
I was divorced after 15yrs of abuse and felt like you had looked into my soul and saw how I felt at that terrible time. I have now been remarried to a wonderful man for 12yrs. You have captured the feelings of someone who has been betrayed. Great Job!
Thanks for the info! I am new to this web site and new to writing. I'm an avid reader and am now in the process of full filling my dream of being a writer. I am in a creative writing class, working on my second assignment. I have 4 items posted the advice and knowlage you give here is great! Thanks again.
What a lovely story! Brought tears to my eyes. It reminded me of the morning my Father passed away. The morphine given him for pain that night had put him in a coma, but before that he had kissed and told my Mother how much he loved her and the 45 yrs they had been married. Even though your story was short it was full of emotion and depth. I enjoyed reading it.
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