Wow!!! I love this! You did a really great job. I love how you described the characters (this makes it a lot easier to tell who's who). Do you write much? I hope to see a lot more of your work on here and maybe one day you can put out some books. I'd be interested in reading them.
At first I was kind of confused with all the names but for someone to take the time out and create a glossary for their story is kind of neat. I also like how you can pretty put your own name or characters name in the characters place. Very creative! I can't wait to actually read the story.
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