I found this story incredibly interesting and amusing to read. I'm really glad you use correct grammar -- most of the other stories I've seen don't, and it bothers me. Keep up the good work, and I hope you like my additions! (:
Oooh, nice! I like it! The only thing I say you should improve on is the grammar. There were a lot of spelling and punctuation mistakes but other than that, it was a pretty good story. Good job! (:
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