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Review of Thank You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
That poem really makes me think about what I do with my life. Sometimes we as humans forget that we are creations and children of God. He who is our Savior sacrificed himself for us, and we often do not thank him. So now I thank you, for reminding me to thank Him.

God Bless you,
love_is _forever
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Review by love_is_forever Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Gosh, that is such a powerful message. Write on.
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Review of Your Fat Family  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
You have some great creativity, however not so great grammer. And that is why I docked you some points. In m,y opinion, you have great potential. I think you should continue writing, but maybe reconcider some of the things you write. I really like what you have to say.
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