It may have been short, but i liked where it was going. The main character reminded me of a Gnoll, and it followed the status of the race. Either way, having a main character that is different and original was a great move. You even gave the character a personality and guilty for what she was doing. Good Job!
My first time ever reviewing a haiku, and i would have to say that it is very good. I have always liked the simplicity of a haiku, though i am sure it was hard to write. Keep up the good work.
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