This poem is sharp, succinct, and speaks clearly of the experience of having depression completely drain you of autonomy. The imagery is evocative and strong. This is work to leave a mark and is worthy of pride and acknowledgment. I hope you were able to pull your pieces back together. I hear someone else telling a familiar story. I hope you are well and that you keep writing.
This is good work and has a feeling of commonality that makes it relatable. You have a lot of good work ahead of you, and I hope that you stay with us until you're able to get your feet again and find your voice. I am looking forward to reading more from you.
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