astrother's (audanne) Reviews

astrother

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#3606608

Review of THE AUTUMN OF MY LIFE

Review by astrother

Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

This poem evoked in me a stillness to life moving on

The rhyming scheme was good

I could see myself in my yard watching falling leaves - the character was believable

It flowed nicely

Anyone could relate to your poem in their own way and place because the poem was not in a specific place.. I liked that.

The poem is memorable because I too am watching the years pass by.

It is also great because it is about one moment in time said very succinctly

The title gives the reader a nice foreshadowing of the subject matter

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#3492528

Review of Whispers In The Dark

Review by astrother

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I also hear these whispers in the dark!

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#3490390

Review of " A Poet's Lament "

Review by astrother

Rated: E

| (4.0)

I liked this poem . The last two verses touched my heart.
The first verse did not contain the rhyming scheme of the rest of the poem and I found that distracting.
I liked he repetition of "A cool breeze" through out the poem.

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#3407385

Review of HER PATH

Review by astrother

Rated: E

| (5.0)

I like your work, it is so expressive. Free verse poetry appeals to me and I am trying to become more proficient with this style.

audanne

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#3407381

Review of Brick by Brick

Review by astrother

Rated: E

| (5.0)

This piece touches my heart. I have recently written a poem using the same idea. I titled mine "The Wall." Writing such as this motivates me to go on with life.

audanne

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#3407380

Review of FORGOTTEN 20 lines

Review by astrother

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I think my mother must feel like this. My brothers and sisters and I try to visit her as often as possible to remind her she is not alone. I like the way you write. It is full of sentiment and familiarity.

audanne

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