I love the story to this poem and the mystery that it held. I was waiting to see what happened, but you left the end up to us. Very interesting and exciting. The beat was off on some of the lines a bit, which made it difficult to read at some points, but I also liked the green to red, and how it rhymed. Awesome.
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